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I made this in a halv hour, but used more time on it, than my last one (which was one of the first ones I made (about 2 o' clock at night)) -that's why it sucked.
This is called Good, Better, Best made by me (Mountain), and I made it today
+rep if it was better than my last..?
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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...-untitled.html
This is called Good, Better, Best made by me (Mountain), and I made it today
Now I’m back with some better shit
back with the home-run hit
my last bit wasn’t good
and I know I’m not God
but I keep the beat pumping
cause it’s right from the heart
I’ll go back to the start
although I already won?
but I’m not finished yet
but you’re apparently done
if you aren’t feelin’ this
you not feelin’ every letter
t-o-p cause I’m high above you
and I promise to keep it clean
so I don’t catch a bird flu
you can’t spit at me
cause I’ll spit right back at you
and if you fall then I’m not gonna catch you
I’m not the catcher I’m the hitter
so I know I’ll smash you
try to keep up
even if you’re at the bottom
just like dance and pop
cause it’s rap which rules now
and it’s nothing you can stop
try to look into my face
cause it’s never gonna drop
even if I don’t look familiar
you must’ve heard me before
it’s now my 3rd around
this time I’m driving in a car
yeah I’m back on my shit
and I don’t even have to smash you
I can just go and tilt you
and if you still not feelin’ it
then I already killed you!
back with the home-run hit
my last bit wasn’t good
and I know I’m not God
but I keep the beat pumping
cause it’s right from the heart
I’ll go back to the start
although I already won?
but I’m not finished yet
but you’re apparently done
if you aren’t feelin’ this
you not feelin’ every letter
t-o-p cause I’m high above you
and I promise to keep it clean
so I don’t catch a bird flu
you can’t spit at me
cause I’ll spit right back at you
and if you fall then I’m not gonna catch you
I’m not the catcher I’m the hitter
so I know I’ll smash you
try to keep up
even if you’re at the bottom
just like dance and pop
cause it’s rap which rules now
and it’s nothing you can stop
try to look into my face
cause it’s never gonna drop
even if I don’t look familiar
you must’ve heard me before
it’s now my 3rd around
this time I’m driving in a car
yeah I’m back on my shit
and I don’t even have to smash you
I can just go and tilt you
and if you still not feelin’ it
then I already killed you!
+rep if it was better than my last..?
Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...r-hip-hop.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...-untitled.html
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