Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

[JMSN]

Me and YNR made this track in about 2 hours. We decided New Invasion needed a hit, and we feel this is it. New Invasion Boys. Download, Listen, Post on your facebook/twitter, tell your friends, tell your girl, tell your mom.

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Feedback #1

Feedback #2

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

Was feeling this beat for sure..flame

FTP - nice with the vocals..they sound much better.
You always got the fire lyrics too.
I love going AHH after I spit a verse too haha.

YNR- I feel you did legit on the chorus but you're verse started off good but fell off at the end. It still was good though and you definitely held your end of of the track. That dope line was flame though

I liked this a lot.. 4.2/5

[JMSN]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

lmao, AHHH after the first means you just put your heart into it lol. thanks for the feed man. tell your friends about this track!

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

FTP
Flow - You did good. Flow was nice in ya first verse, not as good on the 2nd.
Lyrics - Lyrics were decent. Had some good wordplay. Some simple rhyming though.
Other - You did good. Keep it up. The "rocker" beats gettin' old to me though.
Your Parts Overall - 4.2/5

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

Was feeling this beat for sure..flame

FTP - nice with the vocals..they sound much better.
You always got the fire lyrics too.
I love going AHH after I spit a verse too haha.

YNR- I feel you did legit on the chorus but you're verse started off good but fell off at the end. It still was good though and you definitely held your end of of the track. That dope line was flame though

I liked this a lot.. 4.2/5

Thanks bro!

[Harry62]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

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[YungNRuthless]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

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[Harry62]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

Sounds good, the vocals could use a better compressor and some slight EQing in the mid frequencies. Are you using blockfish for your compressor? If so, don't use it.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

This a great song, you keep getting better and better. And I like you on the beats with the rock feel. They fit you and YNR.

Flow: FTP was good. Only dropped off here and there but good overall. YNR's verse was pretty good too. Only fell off between the follow you on twitter line and the second to last bar.
Lyrics: Nice lyrics from both, fit the song. Liked FTP's rhyme scheme alot.
Overall: Good track guys New Invasion's killin Tha Studio right now.

4/5

[JrockHQ]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

FTP: nice wordplay & flow
Your type of style matches the beat, So that was a good look

YNR: chorus was good and i felt both of you held your own on else of your verses

Feedback: FTP, your verse would of been alot better if you would of capitalized on your delivery towards the end of ur bars or punchlines, Same with YNR and the chorus it kinda felt forced towards the internal rhymes

Overall: 4/5

[JMSN]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

thanks for the feedback everyone! we appreciate it alot.

[Fireman007]

Re: Mr. FTP & YungNRuthless-First Second & Third

Flow-4/5, it was nice throughout most of the song
Lyrics- 4/5, like someone said before nice wordplay
overall- 4/5, nice song, good listen...keep it up