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  • Young Fire - Scared Money

    Was listening to this song the other day. And decided to do a verse on it. Well here it is.

    Scared money like a graveyard
    Money like monsters and theres nothing that can save yall
    Dying broke is a sin, you better get paid dawg
    If money was sight, then I guess you are Ray Charles
    Why dont you go and get ya money right
    Something weird about ya income like a sunny night
    Make it happen, start actin' how you rappin'
    My money so loud, yall's on mute, no caption
    Keep askin', I'll give you every answer
    Now I'm gettin' to these rapper's head like an antler
    They cant take it, they know they all fakin'
    They mad they aint got dough like me no bakin'
    And no bacon, but I get it poppin'
    Money rainin' down and no time soon will it be stoppin'
    Yall need to stop it, no money in yall's pockets
    My money shootin' to the moon, blast off, rocket

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    protect dunston at all costs

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    Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

    Flow: 5/5: really liked the flow on this one, went perfect with the beat IMO.
    Lyrics: 4/5: great lyrics, especially the bacon line, thanks for informing me what it was about LOL
    Overall: 4.5/5: man your shit just keeps getting better and better. KEEP IT UP.

    New Invasion!

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    • #3
      Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

      u murdered it bro great flow lyrics n emotion bro it was great if u keep this up ur next mixtape will b nothin but fire

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      • #4
        Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

        This is probably your best verse that I've heard but I thought the flow was off. Some words you had to rush to get out. Great lyrics, but if you redo it, it could be perfect.

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        • #5
          Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

          That was some good shit man i liked it we need to do a song together

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          • #6
            Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

            Originally posted by cardenas4o9 View Post
            That was some good shit man i liked it we need to do a song together
            Thanks man! And yes for sure man. Ill get something together soon, and shoot it to you through PM in the next week or so.



            protect dunston at all costs

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            • #7
              Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

              u got a nasal sound in ya voice, but this a cool track i guess.
              Last edited by lilchukieforeheadbig; 07-12-2010, 05:48 AM.

              YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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              • #8
                Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

                Lemme get some more feedback yalll......



                protect dunston at all costs

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                • #9
                  Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

                  Feedback for the homie..

                  Flow: I feel that your flow was ok, you fell of a bit during some parts, it was still good though
                  Lyrics: They were on point as always, 99% of your lyrics on all your songs are always good
                  Other: I feel your voice and everything fit this beat, it was one of your best verse's i've heard.
                  Overall: 4 stars

                  I Would +Rep you but i have to spread some more around before I can

                  Last edited by YoungTune.; 07-12-2010, 11:14 AM.


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                  • #10
                    Re: Young Fire - Scared Money

                    Flow: it wasn't BAD, it was alright, just stay on point more. it was ok though
                    Lyrics: some good shit, like i actually was suprised to hear some of the lines. they were nice
                    Other: beat was good, voice is good lol, no homo. Good beat & lyrics
                    Overall: 3.9

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