Don't Forget remix

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Yeah, but is it workin' now? Because people are saying that they can listen to it now?

"This video has been removed by the user."

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Lol, wtf?

Try this:
YouTube - Don't Forget rap remix

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Is it workin' now?

[Young Corruption]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Is it workin' now?

yeah its workin

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Flow: It was kinda messy and hard to keep up with but it wasnt too bad
Lyrics: Alright didnt really sound like you were trying to be lyrical though
Other Notes: I could hear like a sniffing noise in between your bars. if you can you should edit your vocals and cut those out
Overall Rating: 2.5/5

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Flow: It was kinda messy and hard to keep up with but it wasnt too bad
Lyrics: Alright didnt really sound like you were trying to be lyrical though
Other Notes: I could hear like a sniffing noise in between your bars. if you can you should edit your vocals and cut those out
Overall Rating: 2.5/5

Yeah, it was a lil' quick song, nothin' I went all out on, yk? Lol, yeah, my sinuses were acting up and shit, but right on for the feedback.

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Don't Forget remix

lol yea man you sound like you got a lot of potential if you tried so keep it up

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

lol yea man you sound like you got a lot of potential if you tried so keep it up

Right on, man, I appreciate that.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Don't Forget remix

I got the message pretty clearly. Other cats would give you criticism about how you paced your rhymes within this song. It was pretty good,sir. You remind me of Common with it. I really enjoyed listenin to this. Wish I could add you as a friend on youtube, but I got banned.

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

I got the message pretty clearly. Other cats would give you criticism about how you paced your rhymes within this song. It was pretty good,sir. You remind me of Common with it. I really enjoyed listenin to this. Wish I could add you as a friend on youtube, but I got banned.

I really appreciate that, man! Common is an idol of mine too, lol.

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Can I get a lil' more feedback?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Don't Forget remix

Flow - Wasnt really good to me. With beats like this you gotta make sure you are consistent, and to be honest i dont think you were. You didnt really ride the beat well.
Lyrics - Were good, cant complain.
Other - Your part was really short.
Overall - 2.5/5.