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My first eva attempt at a whole song, all criticism appreciated, tell me somethin to make me better my brothas 
[Verse 1]
This needs no intro
You'll see what I wintro
I'm new, fresh, and got a beat
Like Lebron with the Heat
Just know me as Beasley, you'll all learn
Imma go crazy in this game, you'll get no turn
But ain't no monopoly game, I'm huntin for fame
Like Miley Cyrus I can't be tamed, only famed
I'm not a fuckin Slim Shady, but like the Brady he's a bunch better
I don't spit near fast, but with these lyrics I'll last
Way past your lame white asst
Hailie Mathers is the only one that matters to me, shes hot
But Beasley hold up stay on plot
Its tough bein a white rapper, with rappers like Wayne, West, and 50
But quite nifty Imma Wayne on der parade
Told ya I ain't no fuckin Slim Shade
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Verse 2]
You think I'm funny like Bugs Bunny, I'm Looney with Tunes
You listen to me why you sit there and watch you big boy cartoons
Wanna diss me for what reason, bitch I know you teason
Thatd be fuckin treason
I'm the captaion of this bitch, if you wanna ride you'll have to hitch
No Will Smith here, I'm harder to fuck with
You'll hear me on the radio that ain't no myth
Take in my rhyme like a poem on a steroid
After you hear this, you should be paranoid
Thats a nice shirt, you get that at walmart
Push it around in a lil cart an act like someone gives a flying fart
Yeah I'm harsh like a dawg, cause I can sit, eat, and cum
All over you like Kanye on a white girl
She says lemme see your wee wee, he said nah bitch drink me pee pee
Im doin ya a big favor, lettin ya find out the Kanye Flavor
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Verse 3]
I ain't some fag that raps about wearin a rag
Shootin up drugs or have a series of violent mugs
Infact I had it nice, still do
Your mom doesn't love you, boo hoo, you still don't rap as good as I do
Stayin up tuh 2 an 3 a.m. to write a good verse, then all I do is rehearse
My voice ain't right for this, I know that
I sound like a fat squeaky rat
I can still rip your ass apart with words, rhymes, and bars
I know Imma go as high as the stars
Play yo gay guitars, while I'm messin around with the sexiest superstars
I'll be on MTV, BET, and VH1, your on comedy central makin stupid puns
Cause you can ask Beavis, I get nothin Butt head
But I'm more into south park, and like Kenny you'll be left dead
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Outro]
First of many, keep listenin tuh Double B!
Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-up-remix.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post221304
[Verse 1]
This needs no intro
You'll see what I wintro
I'm new, fresh, and got a beat
Like Lebron with the Heat
Just know me as Beasley, you'll all learn
Imma go crazy in this game, you'll get no turn
But ain't no monopoly game, I'm huntin for fame
Like Miley Cyrus I can't be tamed, only famed
I'm not a fuckin Slim Shady, but like the Brady he's a bunch better
I don't spit near fast, but with these lyrics I'll last
Way past your lame white asst
Hailie Mathers is the only one that matters to me, shes hot
But Beasley hold up stay on plot
Its tough bein a white rapper, with rappers like Wayne, West, and 50
But quite nifty Imma Wayne on der parade
Told ya I ain't no fuckin Slim Shade
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Verse 2]
You think I'm funny like Bugs Bunny, I'm Looney with Tunes
You listen to me why you sit there and watch you big boy cartoons
Wanna diss me for what reason, bitch I know you teason
Thatd be fuckin treason
I'm the captaion of this bitch, if you wanna ride you'll have to hitch
No Will Smith here, I'm harder to fuck with
You'll hear me on the radio that ain't no myth
Take in my rhyme like a poem on a steroid
After you hear this, you should be paranoid
Thats a nice shirt, you get that at walmart
Push it around in a lil cart an act like someone gives a flying fart
Yeah I'm harsh like a dawg, cause I can sit, eat, and cum
All over you like Kanye on a white girl
She says lemme see your wee wee, he said nah bitch drink me pee pee
Im doin ya a big favor, lettin ya find out the Kanye Flavor
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Verse 3]
I ain't some fag that raps about wearin a rag
Shootin up drugs or have a series of violent mugs
Infact I had it nice, still do
Your mom doesn't love you, boo hoo, you still don't rap as good as I do
Stayin up tuh 2 an 3 a.m. to write a good verse, then all I do is rehearse
My voice ain't right for this, I know that
I sound like a fat squeaky rat
I can still rip your ass apart with words, rhymes, and bars
I know Imma go as high as the stars
Play yo gay guitars, while I'm messin around with the sexiest superstars
I'll be on MTV, BET, and VH1, your on comedy central makin stupid puns
Cause you can ask Beavis, I get nothin Butt head
But I'm more into south park, and like Kenny you'll be left dead
[Chorus]
Cause I'm Brandt Beasley, I'm takin my chance
There ain't nothing to lose, ain't like a romance
You'll see, you'll all see, Imma be what I was meant to be
Always on top of thee
With nasty bars and rhymes, tellin ya no lies for no fines.
You look at me and outta ten I'm all nines.
[Outro]
First of many, keep listenin tuh Double B!
Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-up-remix.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post221304
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