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  • Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

    This here is suppose to be the lead off track to my upcoming mixtape "Day the moon comes crashing down". It's over the Patna Dem beat. The tape is almost done, so be on the lookout .

    Paradox - Allow Me to Introduce Myself

    (verse: Paradox)
    watch as I pick up a pencil, and write my name in the sky.
    I'm so out of this world, these dudes are out of their minds.
    I'm as real as it gets, may the fake drown in a pool of cyanide.
    haters cant afford to face the truth, so they pretend to be blind.
    I'm striving for the future, the past I left behind.
    I'm at the bottom for now, but I'm gearing up for the climb.
    hated being wrong, so I tuned up, and got my mind right.
    -
    fuck the clock,
    I don't have enough time, to waste my time.
    so its overtime, all the time for me.
    stacking minutes, seconds, hours,
    I'm a forever growing flower,
    sprouting to make a name for myself.
    -
    the hate is sour, and revenge is so sweet.
    keep dragons around me because I spit that gasoline.
    talk shit, ill spit on you,
    then watch your ass burn and bleed, till you die.
    sucker!
    the say death comes after everybody,
    guess I'm still waiting for my turn.
    when life no longer wants you,
    it'll just kick you to the curve.
    take notes on what I rap about,
    there is always something you can learn.
    -
    show no fear, therefore I'm well respected,
    got the heart of warrior, deep in my voice lies the resonance.
    slaughter beats, leave no evidence.
    cops be like why cant this guy just be evident.
    I'm a hell raiser, god forgive me for I have sinned,
    put me in the game, I'll walk out the champion on one limb.
    don't whisper, unless you got a secret to pass on,
    these dudes are gross, gas is the only thing they pass on.

    (verse: Paradox)
    pass me the mic, I meant hand me the baton.
    hip-hop darling its my turn, I promise I wont do you wrong.
    let me take the time, to stress all of this bullshit,
    you speak it, back it up, or your life will end quick.
    I'm a run it, run it, run it, till I feel my feet become sore.
    these haters run their mouths until the get blisters, on there tongues.
    gross...

    (verse: Paradox)
    I'm just your average dude, somebody great is what I'm trying to be,
    can't be perfect all the time, I give it all that I can be,
    allow me to introduce myself, if you don't know me by now...

    feedback
    McCrary - Your Love
    Dreezy Baby - Not Afraid



    Gemma Arterton

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    Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

    It's good to hear someone who isn't on a $10 mic. Keep it up bro
    Upload your songs/beats here:
    www.mixjig.com


    Losin' Myself by: Rizky
    http://mixjig.com/file.php?id=da1133...9330059a7cfb8b

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    • #3
      Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

      Appreciate it dude

      Gemma Arterton

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      • #4
        Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

        Been waiting on you to drop some more shit bro.

        Flow: Great flow. You got a great style of rhymin.
        Lyrics: Great lyrics man. You took this track to another level.
        Overall 4.2/5

        Waiting for the tape man.

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        • #5
          Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

          your feedback is appreciated as always bro. we should collab sometime again. ill see if I have any tracks for you to jump on if you're down

          Gemma Arterton

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          • #6
            Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

            this beat is epic.

            YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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            • #7
              Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

              I'm ready whenever you are man. Send me anything you want a verse on.

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              • #8
                Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

                Flow: Excellent, reminds me of mine in some ways lol
                Lyrics: Not bad, lots of good bits here and there
                Other Notes: Turn up the vocals. Nice introductory track

                Overall: 4/5, overall great work man. look forward to rest of the stuff you put out

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                • #9
                  Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

                  Appreciate the feedback bro.

                  Gemma Arterton

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                  • #10
                    Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

                    Oh ssshit... This crazy! Luv it, 4/5

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                    • #11
                      Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

                      Flow:its pretty nice, not bad bro
                      Lyrics: alot alike of lines you said
                      Other Notes: yeah fix the vocals a little bit more
                      Overall: 3/5

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                      • #12
                        Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself

                        Appreciate it dudes. Will turn up the vocals for the final version.

                        Gemma Arterton

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