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Re: Paradox - Allow Me To Introduce Myself
8th bar wasn't wrong but it sounded off using 'mind' and 'right'. I would've only gone with one that rhymed with the previous bar.
Using gross and stopping midway through a few lines should be cleaned up for future references.
It wasn't all bs rap, so I was able to listen through it. One of the best songs on THIS site I've heard.
8th bar wasn't wrong but it sounded off using 'mind' and 'right'. I would've only gone with one that rhymed with the previous bar.
Using gross and stopping midway through a few lines should be cleaned up for future references.
It wasn't all bs rap, so I was able to listen through it. One of the best songs on THIS site I've heard.
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