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    What now

    Im walking chest out like the macho dude

    Im a nice guy but these people actin kinda rude

    Im rich full of pride but i know i got nothing

    I have everything i need you will never see me fronting

    I cry every day you wont see me shed a tear

    You ask me whats wrong i'll tell you exactly what you want to hear

    Nothing man nothing its just another bad day

    I put my problems to the back but they always seem to stay

    So i ask myself what would jesus do

    I dont think he was ever in this cituation how bout you?

    I must say hes overcome more than me

    I dont think his mom left him im blind god please let me see

    So i can live just for one more day

    So i can go do business cause i have dues to pay

    Then its done and over with my mind can be set free

    My body flows without a care freely like the breeze



    When i made this track i said this is something drake would do

    People said dont copy nobody just do you

    Who the hell do you think i am *ive always been doing me

    I was never recognized homie why cant you see

    So stop being naieve and just listen

    All i ever wanted was my small time to glisten

    But people have to take everything that i own

    I have nothing of mine shoved to the side of the road

    So im left with the scars on my face

    I walk around and i look like a fucking disgrace

    Ive done nothing for my family except to cause trouble

    I try to change the scene but i pull more stunts than a double

    What will i do should i end it right here?

    Will people like me or turn me down like a deaf ear

    If i make it will i be used like a tool

    Please tell me now so i dont look like a fool

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  • #2
    Re: What now

    Skimmed through it, wasn't the same shit as others, not bad but can definitely be better.

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    • #3
      Re: What now

      Not that good, but was aight

      Flow 3/5
      Overall 2,5

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