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  • #85
    Re: Official Ether Thread

    3.5/5
    Originally posted by devinkeller2 View Post
    2.5/5
    you think you have potential, well i have the kinetic,
    you can barely write, your bars are Metro pathetic,
    i heard your warning, and i know i wont heed it,
    your verse is like twilight, i dont wanna read it,
    you say youre unsigned, and itll stay that way,
    necessary roughness, yeah i play that way,
    i know you wont snap back, youre like a fitted,
    domestic violence flow, your girl let me hit it
    hey devinkeller you are not more then a trailer,
    i am the boss of this game and you are just a labour,
    your bitch ain't safe so please go and tell her,
    i know her pussy sweet so i am gonna fail her,
    so give me her id cause i am gonna mail her,
    and if you not gonna do that i cut you with the razor,
    you talk bout the kinetic i am gonna sink you like the titanic,
    so please take some tonic cause your style is very chronic

    hey don't mind just game.
    Last edited by akkucc; 09-18-2011, 04:58 PM.

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    • #86
      Re: Official Ether Thread

      Originally posted by akkucc View Post
      3.5/5


      hey devinkeller you are not more then a trailer,
      i am the boss of this game and you are just a labour,
      your bitch ain't safe so please go and tell her,
      i know her pussy sweet so i am gonna fail her,
      so give me her id cause i am gonna mail her,
      and if you not gonna do that i cut you with the razor,
      you talk bout the kinetic i am gonna sink you like the titanic,
      so please take some tonic cause your style is very chronic

      hey don't mind just game.
      akkucc killing as alwayss 4.5/5

      you say dont mind, just game,
      well i dont mind shit, i just spit flame,
      you can take my girl, ans she'll suck my dick ill coat her throat,
      you say youll sink me like titantic, well whatever floats your boat,
      it took over a week for someone to attempt to fight me,
      youre no match, you couldnt even light me,
      i kill youre verse, i always slay ether,
      you try and suckerpunch i should call you mayweather,
      right hook left jab like manny,
      run this site like danny,
      my flow is so uncanny,
      so run on home to mammy,


      (last line was weak but oh well :p)
      "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
      "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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      • #87
        Re: Official Ether Thread

        Originally posted by devinkeller2 View Post
        akkucc killing as alwayss 4.5/5

        you say dont mind, just game,
        well i dont mind shit, i just spit flame,
        you can take my girl, ans she'll suck my dick ill coat her throat,
        you say youll sink me like titantic, well whatever floats your boat,
        it took over a week for someone to attempt to fight me,
        youre no match, you couldnt even light me,
        i kill youre verse, i always slay ether,
        you try and suckerpunch i should call you mayweather,
        right hook left jab like manny,
        run this site like danny,
        my flow is so uncanny,
        so run on home to mammy,


        (last line was weak but oh well :p)
        4/5 great bro,

        hey you don't mind shit cause i know you are shit,
        i am gonna kill you boy and gonna put inside pit,
        yeah we don't have match,cause i am the one who hard split,
        ohh, so you spit the flame, yeah my son do that the same,
        you are just kid son but i am the king of game,
        talking bout verse killing, i make your life hard for living,
        you don't know me boy, i am the one who is game driving,
        this studio is my home and i know well bout the rat killings,
        so please leave this place and go and play with your siblings,
        Last edited by akkucc; 09-19-2011, 02:55 PM.

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        • #88
          Re: Official Ether Thread

          Originally posted by akkucc View Post
          4/5 great bro,

          hey you don't mind shit cause i know you are shit,
          i am gonna kill you boy and gonna put inside pit,
          yeah we don't have match,cause i am the one who hard split,
          ohh, so you spit the flame, yeah my son do that the same,
          you are just kid son but i am the king of game,
          talking bout verse killing, i make your life hard for living,
          you don't know me boy, i am the one who is game driving,
          this studio is my home and i know well bout the rat killings,
          so please leave this place and go and play with your siblings,
          2/5
          akkucc you just got beat, no i mean raped
          devinkeller2 embodied you, and i showed up late
          while you busy writing, i'm making money
          i see you trying, but your attempts are funny
          once you learn to rhyme, then step up to the plate
          until then, i'll sit in my throne and wait
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          • #89
            Re: Official Ether Thread

            2/5
            akkucc you just got beat, no i mean raped
            devinkeller2 embodied you, and i showed up late
            while you busy writing, i'm making money
            i see you trying, but your attempts are funny
            once you learn to rhyme, then step up to the plate
            until then, i'll sit in my throne and wait
            (3.5/5)

            it says youre a weezy vet,
            but youre a rookie to me,
            you try to stand tall,
            youre just snookie to me,
            you claim to be sitting in the throne,
            you say you're just "waiting",
            i know thats code for in your bed,
            enjoying the 10 seconds you were masturbating,
            thinking about your long distance girl,
            and how she looks when you're skyping,
            im sitting here murdering you,
            getting blown by her as im typing,

            and for the last fewbars, it has to be said,
            killing you guys is just my butter and bread,
            the shit i spit is real, straight from my head,
            someone bring me a challenge, im destroying this thread,

            ;D ^^^ not really hating on ya young corruption, just freestylingg
            Last edited by devinkeller2; 09-20-2011, 05:54 AM.
            "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
            "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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            • #90
              Re: Official Ether Thread

              Originally posted by devinkeller2 View Post
              (3.5/5)

              it says youre a weezy vet,
              but youre a rookie to me,
              you try to stand tall,
              youre just snookie to me,
              you claim to be sitting in the throne,
              you say you're just "waiting",
              i know thats code for in your bed,
              enjoying the 10 seconds you were masturbating,
              thinking about your long distance girl,
              and how she looks when you're skyping,
              im sitting here murdering you,
              getting blown by her as im typing,

              and for the last fewbars, it has to be said,
              killing you guys is just my butter and bread,
              the shit i spit is real, straight from my head,
              someone bring me a challenge, im destroying this thread,

              ;D ^^^ not really hating on ya young corruption, just freestylingg
              lol if i wouldn't have known better i swear you have heard my straight stalking song and the skyping . i'll come back and edit this post tonight when i come back home and be ready man
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              • #91
                Re: Official Ether Thread

                im readyyy son l-_l
                "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
                "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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                • #92
                  Re: Official Ether Thread

                  Originally posted by devinkeller2 View Post
                  (3.5/5)

                  it says youre a weezy vet,
                  but youre a rookie to me,
                  you try to stand tall,
                  youre just snookie to me,
                  you claim to be sitting in the throne,
                  you say you're just "waiting",
                  i know thats code for in your bed,
                  enjoying the 10 seconds you were masturbating,
                  thinking about your long distance girl,
                  and how she looks when you're skyping,
                  im sitting here murdering you,
                  getting blown by her as im typing,

                  and for the last fewbars, it has to be said,
                  killing you guys is just my butter and bread,
                  the shit i spit is real, straight from my head,
                  someone bring me a challenge, im destroying this thread,

                  ;D ^^^ not really hating on ya young corruption, just freestylingg
                  so 3 days late, just like your chick
                  i had her on her knees trying to suck my dick
                  you can have my ex, she was nothing but a slut
                  probably had an STD, so go and press your luck
                  now on to you, i hold nothing back
                  i'm a murderer, i'll stab you in the back
                  bag you up, whats up with that?
                  i make ever line rhyme, something you might wanna try
                  that might be too hard for you, don't try till you die
                  i'm done with this shit, i'm getting too bored
                  i'll help you out while you hang from a cord


                  lol man this is all fun and games and just like you i have nothing against you and if i said something in this^^^ to offend you i am sorry

                  EDIT: the comma is showing where there is a pause in the rhyme
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                  • #93
                    Re: Official Ether Thread

                    so 3 days late, just like your chick
                    i had her on her knees trying to suck my dick
                    you can have my ex, she was nothing but a slut
                    probably had an STD, so go and press your luck
                    now on to you, i hold nothing back
                    i'm a murderer, i'll stab you in the back
                    bag you up, whats up with that?
                    i make ever line rhyme, something you might wanna try
                    that might be too hard for you, don't try till you die
                    i'm done with this shit, i'm getting too bored
                    i'll help you out while you hang from a cord
                    3.5/5

                    aight, well i guess im bringing the beef,
                    your girls teeth are so white its like im banging her teeth,
                    and you, youre about as soft as some socks or some mittens,
                    i worry more about getting hurt by boxes of kittens,
                    like a 90 year old man, i dont need a fucking beat,
                    all these women following me, and i dont need to fucking tweet,
                    and im sure you know nothing of corruption,
                    the way i blow up, i cant be bluffing my epuption,
                    i spit, like your baby girl did the other night,
                    maybe you can teach her how to swallow right,

                    pauseee...
                    Last edited by devinkeller2; 09-25-2011, 12:34 AM. Reason: forgot to rate//quote//spellingz :D
                    "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
                    "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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                    • #94
                      Re: Official Ether Thread

                      Originally posted by devinkeller2 View Post
                      3.5/5

                      aight, well i guess im bringing the beef,
                      your girls teeth are so white its like im banging her teeth,
                      and you, youre about as soft as some socks or some mittens,
                      i worry more about getting hurt by boxes of kittens,
                      like a 90 year old man, i dont need a fucking beat,
                      all these women following me, and i dont need to fucking tweet,
                      and im sure you know nothing of corruption,
                      the way i blow up, i cant be bluffing my epuption,
                      i spit, like your baby girl did the other night,
                      maybe you can teach her how to swallow right,

                      pauseee...
                      3.5/5 that was better lol

                      one more time with this written shit
                      cause unlike you i got a beat to make a hit
                      you got some nice lines, okay i'll give you that
                      but you better beware or i'll hit you in the sac
                      cause i play dirty, oh yes i do
                      i can make you my bitch, you'll be calling me boo
                      you don't know what i've gone through, the shit i've seen
                      i'm done more things that would make a grown man scream
                      see i don't lie when i rap, i spit the whole truth
                      now i'm gonna end it with a goodbye, i hope your bulletproof


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                      • #95
                        Re: Official Ether Thread

                        Originally posted by Young Corruption View Post
                        3.5/5 that was better lol

                        one more time with this written shit
                        cause unlike you i got a beat to make a hit
                        you got some nice lines, okay i'll give you that
                        but you better beware or i'll hit you in the sac
                        cause i play dirty, oh yes i do
                        i can make you my bitch, you'll be calling me boo
                        you don't know what i've gone through, the shit i've seen
                        i'm done more things that would make a grown man scream
                        see i don't lie when i rap, i spit the whole truth
                        now i'm gonna end it with a goodbye, i hope your bulletproof


                        2.5/5


                        Well I am, and nigga ya can call me Sam
                        cause not even all ya "[ro]but's" preventin' me for goin' HAM
                        On you and your bread, on ya salam
                        What do "i" care since it's not even there, well I'm right here
                        Murking ya ass so bad ya can't even sit on the high chair
                        Now I'm the one sittin' on The Throne shittin' not only on you alone
                        Ye and Z can get it too since that place is not their home
                        Stop hidding behind gold, ya didn't even had that many sold the first week
                        yet, I know it, but look at the white-and-red opponent
                        964 on ya ass, and he didn't even show it
                        I'm Out...

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                        • #96
                          Re: Official Ether Thread

                          Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
                          2.5/5


                          Well I am, and nigga ya can call me Sam
                          cause not even all ya "[ro]but's" preventin' me for goin' HAM
                          On you and your bread, on ya salam
                          What do "i" care since it's not even there, well I'm right here
                          Murking ya ass so bad ya can't even sit on the high chair
                          Now I'm the one sittin' on The Throne shittin' not only on you alone
                          Ye and Z can get it too since that place is not their home
                          Stop hidding behind gold, ya didn't even had that many sold the first week
                          yet, I know it, but look at the white-and-red opponent
                          964 on ya ass, and he didn't even show it
                          I'm Out...
                          3/5
                          alright aj, time to leave we were good without you,
                          weak ass verses and shitty rhymes is all we know about you,
                          and truthfully, we dont really need to know more,
                          since you seem good at sucking, teach your girl to blow more,
                          you see, when she sucks shes slopping like she was a pig,
                          and the only thing good you did was put that date on your sig,
                          "i am sam", boy you must really be retarded
                          i destroyed you and i havent even really started,
                          your attempt to beat me has been 100 percent thrawted
                          the next thing you'll be seeing is the sky after you get carted,
                          to the locker room, i hope youre getting the picture,
                          after i get it in her ass she'll be shitting a mixture,
                          in the throne, back up from the border because i deport most,
                          the only thing youll for you thats clicking is you hitting "report post",


                          (i dont feel like editing any spelling errors so have fun taking shots if i misspelled something )
                          Last edited by devinkeller2; 09-26-2011, 02:01 AM. Reason: forgot rating AGAIN
                          "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
                          "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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