Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

[JayReal21]

New Song of my upcoming mixtape "Brain Storm"

I Dont Like The Look (Remix) - Song by Jay Reale @HotNewHipHop.com

p.s. please no one talk about my voice, im almost 14 and its getting deeper and im getting a better voice for hip hop. thanks

UPDATE: Heres the youtube link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=14x6abrAsuc

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post232805
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post232803

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow: was good, try to calm down a little tho, sounds like you're speedingg...
Lyrics: not bad bro
Other: you started ripping towards the end! lol
Overall: 3.5/5

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Dont mind this post haha
look below VV

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow: was good, try to calm down a little tho, sounds like you're speedingg...
Lyrics: not bad bro
Other: you started ripping towards the end! lol
Overall: 3.5/5

THANKS BRO!!!! i really appreciate that from you because your one of the best on the forums! (no disrespect to anybody else)

if you got twitter, hit me up @RealJayReal

[ATLien666]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow- Seem hurried, like you was rushing to get it out, or you recorded it in one take. It also sounded like you were just reading it off paper, and didn't have any parts of it memorized.

Lyrics- Were nice, punchlines weren't anything special, but the overall lyrics were cool.

Other- Yeah, like Dreezy said, towards the end, you snapped, bro. Also, it wouldn't hurt if you put some swag into your raps, cause it sounds like you're not really feeling yourself.

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow- Seem hurried, like you was rushing to get it out, or you recorded it in one take. It also sounded like you were just reading it off paper, and didn't have any parts of it memorized.

Lyrics- Were nice, punchlines weren't anything special, but the overall lyrics were cool.

Other- Yeah, like Dreezy said, towards the end, you snapped, bro. Also, it wouldn't hurt if you put some swag into your raps, cause it sounds like you're not really feeling yourself.

Yeah on twitter and other websites i posted the link on, i said i was gonna re record it. and it was in one take. What do you mean by put some swag into it? thanks for the feedback

[Pestrator]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

this aint bad bro ur flow was a lil rushed inthe begini u need to like practice it more so it doesnt sound liek ur readin it off n like u need mor elike emotion bc the song is kinda liek bland but its not bad bro keep on practiing n improving!

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

this aint bad bro ur flow was a lil rushed inthe begini u need to like practice it more so it doesnt sound liek ur readin it off n like u need mor elike emotion bc the song is kinda liek bland but its not bad bro keep on practiing n improving!

thanks for the advice!

[Whal3z]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow: Nice! Smooth & Fast Love It..
Lyrics: And My Flow Never Stops Call It A Clock! Nice
Other: I wanna hear some more bro!
Overall: 4/5 Nice Job Although Kinda Short

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow: Nice! Smooth & Fast Love It..
Lyrics: And My Flow Never Stops Call It A Clock! Nice
Other: I wanna hear some more bro!
Overall: 4/5 Nice Job Although Kinda Short

yeah i only did one verse. but its for my mixtape and my other songs will be longer, thanks!

[AllStarDaDon]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow:2/5
Lyrics:2/5 was not feelin' it. It was everything I already heard before. Far from horrible tho
Other Notes:It was 59 seconds -_- comeon man I wanted to hear more
Overall/Rating:2/5

[JayReal21]

Re: Jay Reale - I Don't Like The Look (Remix)

Flow:2/5
Lyrics:2/5 was not feelin' it. It was everything I already heard before. Far from horrible tho
Other Notes:It was 59 seconds -_- comeon man I wanted to hear more
Overall/Rating:2/5

why would you wanna hear more if you didnt like the lyrics or flow