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  • Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

    Ahh.. so YF released his verse lol so here's the full. I was gonna release another track but might as well let ya hear this one. Now i know I've been away for a minute haha. im on some shit but i'll be back in a month or so .. For now, listen to my verses in this track and leave feedback please. It's off an upcoming mixtape.
    pce. til idk when.



    Lyrics (My Verses Only)

    Verse 1:

    Who am i, that boy you been waiting for,
    Im way above you while you still tryna leave the floor
    MVP in this bitch, you better be keep score,
    Rap is a jungle and its my time to explore
    If music was a sin I would go to hell twice,
    Fake MC’s be aware if you think you nice
    Cause im hungry for rappers, you can be my rice
    Im that nigga that’s never scared to roll the dice
    Who that be? That boy with the sore feet
    cause im running for my spot, you must agree
    Flow hotter than 100 degrees,
    and my rhymes way harder than a block of concrete
    Jay Tunes nigga, higher than air balllon nigga,
    hotter than summer noon nigga
    Youre nothing but dust, and im the broom nigga,
    talk shit now im about to leave the room nigga

    [Hook - J.Cole]


    Verse 2:

    Yes I got that flame so im on fire,
    Better than me? Don’t be a fuckin liar
    Better lines you need to acquire,
    if not its just best you fucking retire
    Im running this but im never getting tired,
    you know I spit realAnd im getting fat cause your girl is my daily meal,
    I spit bars of steel, On the moon like neil,
    Shark in the water, youre just another lonely seal
    Get used to me losers, Im here to stay don’t give a fuck who refuses
    I just hit em with punchlines til I see the bruises,
    your just full of excuses, and it's so fucking amusing
    Doing me relieves my tension, Music is the world's greatest invention
    Free Weezy how could I forget to mention?
    But now ima let this boy take you to another dimension,
    after the hook its all about the guy from ascension
    Last edited by Jamerson; 08-09-2010, 03:47 PM.

  • #2
    Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

    Lovin this song man. Good job both of you guys

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    • #3
      Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

      5/5 good shit both...i was really surprised by this ...
      Check my beats out on : www.soundclick.com/tmzbeatz. T-M-Z on the muthafuckin' beat!

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      • #4
        Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

        No disrespect but the flow is horrible.. Both of you. Sounded very amateur and was very plain. Try working on that.
        Made by me BISH!




        "Me and them rappers don't share a common ground, I'm a sphere, they are squares, they can't even come aROUND. - Wale.


        "All my niggas loyal yeah we some different niggas, I heard ya dogs was talking they Brian Griffin niggas."


        Step towards this nigga get 4X2.

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        • #5
          Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

          i think yf did good i dont liek how he cahnged the lines he did i liekd how he had that small part on that deep voice but jay ur lyrics werent bad but the delivery imo seemed a lil rshed n sloppy but lyrics were good n needed more like umph for this track

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          • #6
            Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

            I Think Is Pretty Nice You Two Should Collab More Verse Two Was Epic

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            • #7
              Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

              Flow: Jay Tunes:flow was nice but seemed a little plain and too structured.YF:liked your flow, only seemed like you were trying to stay on time near the end by extending and shortening words
              Lyrics:
              Jay Tunes:had some good bars.at the same time things like rhyming fire and liar kinda threw me off. YF:nothing too special in this one. kinda looking for deeper stuff
              Other Notes: n/a
              Overall/Rating:
              3/5

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              • #8
                Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

                Im just going to comment on Jay Tunes cuz i already commented on Fires Flame shit haha
                Flow: Sounded good man it sounds like your gettin better so keep it up its really good
                Lyrics: Always got good lyrics bro
                Overall: 4/5

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                • #9
                  Re: Who Dat - Jay Tunes ft. Young Fire (Full)

                  Dope guys, i liked it

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