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  • Dreezy - Trondo Music

    Really liked the beat so I did my own version
    This is just a verse to 3 verses I did tho!

    Download/Stream Hulkshare.com Trondo Music (Preview).mp3

    [Verse]

    No need for talking, I speak from the heart of course
    They looking for my verses, this is not a chorus
    But I seem to see the top, with the roof on
    All black two-toned, rims on too grown
    Never gotta stunt, unlike the double
    Baby girl pass the good, while I light the trouble
    Few things going wrong but I fight the struggle
    Just do it with my clique, Nike buckle
    I never heard the word quit boy
    You aint gotta have hair, to get yo wig split boy
    Hate is just a phase, love is sequence
    Money is my lover, nigga I don't even see friends
    Drowned by the cash, yeah I got my sea fins
    Yeah you getting money, but me, I'm in the deep end
    And I don't never pre-tend
    Church every Sunday, but I don't be preaching
    Momma told me do right, or get the cash left
    That's why I take elevators, fuck the last step
    My girl tell me, "Gone on! With yo bad self"
    I appear happy, but I need mad help
    To get the picture, make sure you can see the frame
    You can't always be good, in this evil game
    Robbing beats, I don't even leave the change
    I guess that's the reason I need a change
    I take respect nigga, you can keep the change
    "Dreezy the best!" That's what the speaker saying
    If you need it, gotta go for it
    And I would, no gopher


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    Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

    Flow - Was nice. Was super on point in the middle of the verse.
    Lyric's - They were pretty good. Probably would've been better if a couple line's were left out, and new one's add. But can't complain.
    Overall - 4/5.



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    • #3
      Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

      lol, alotta random ass lines.

      try to stay on topic, this shit sound like a freestyle

      wtf is this song about ?? trondo is a type of fish

      fish music??? lmao

      YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • #4
        Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

        Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
        lol, alotta random ass lines.

        try to stay on topic, this shit sound like a freestyle

        wtf is this song about ?? trondo is a type of fish

        fish music??? lmao
        Trondo is a nickname for my dad's 'Cedes nigga. the fuck is you talkin 'bout.
        and I didn't need to stay on topic cuz there was no topic to stay on, 28 bars straight thru, I didn't go in wanting to tell no damn story, just a quick verse, you sick

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        • #5
          Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

          Flow- 4/5 agree with THP, on point in the middle. but before that it was alrite. punchlines good. (idk if it goes underflow or lyrics)
          Lyrics- Very good lyrics. liked the rhymes. couldve had a couple better lines in there but its still good 4/5
          Other- Liked the Weezy lighter flick in the beginning.
          Overall- 4/5 your pretty good man

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          • #6
            Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

            Originally posted by shbasketball12 View Post
            Flow- 4/5 agree with THP, on point in the middle. but before that it was alrite. punchlines good. (idk if it goes underflow or lyrics)
            Lyrics- Very good lyrics. liked the rhymes. couldve had a couple better lines in there but its still good 4/5
            Other- Liked the Weezy lighter flick in the beginning.
            Overall- 4/5 your pretty good man

            Thanks man, appreciate it alot, stayed tuned brother

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            • #7
              Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

              Flow - Starting to like it more.
              Lyrics - I don't know but i felt these lyrics where pretty real man,
              Overall - 4/5
              Other - keep this up i like this style.

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              • #8
                Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

                Flow: Always got that nice flow man and that was a cool ass beat
                Lyrics: You got punchlines for days dude haha good shit but some did seem kinda random
                Overall:4/5

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                • #9
                  Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

                  Nice track bro, shows your versality.

                  Flow: Perfect.
                  Lyrics: Nice punchlines as usual. Multis were good too.

                  4.5/5 Nice work bro.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

                    thanks for all the feedback guys ^ love yal niggas

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                    • #11
                      Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

                      man totally killed it... flow is nice and pro.. beat is sick.. lyrics and punchlines are the SHIT man that was dope
                      I got ice in my veins, blood in my eyes
                      Hate in my heart, love in my mind
                      I seen nights full of pain, days of the same
                      You keep the sunshine, save me the rain
                      I search but never find, hurt but never cry
                      I work and forever try, but I’m cursed, so never mind
                      And it’s worse, but better times seem further and beyond
                      The top gets higher the more that I climb


                      the best headshot ever!!

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                      • #12
                        Re: Dreezy - Trondo Music

                        Alright song, rhymes were pretty tight. You had some ok wordplay. I thought the flow was a little shakey in the begining but then it got better. Your delivery was pretty weak though, you need some more force behind your voice. Mixing sounds like it could be improved also.

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