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    Who Dat



    Second street single off my upcoming mixtape

    Break Your F*ckin Radio
    Dropping September 7, 2010

    Lyrics
    Who Dat (Repeat)
    Verse 1
    You hear the marchin band bitch
    Second line marchin at your funeral bitch
    Yeah I'm killa, thought I told you before
    I'm so hot in street fights, nigga pray for snow
    But nothin can put out the flame
    Yes I did bang, but now I'm chillin gettin paid for the name
    Niggas wishin they was wayne and t-pain,
    But I'd rather be me, I stand in the game
    Ball in one had, shoot to kill
    One sec on the clock
    Hold up one finger, when I shoot the rock
    Now worries it goes swish, Crowd Cheers my name
    MC-crary get it right, for I say it again
    MC_Crary
    oops, i say that shit all the time
    but its earned, when you see a nigga grind
    So dont even try to find a nigga thats better
    Cause I'm fly no feather
    My voice get a ho wetter
    Hook
    Who Dat, Who Dat
    Bitch I spit insane
    Repeat 3x
    So don't worry bout my muthafuckin name
    Verse 2
    I am so nasty, indecent exposure
    Tell ya boy get at me if he needin yhe doisha
    Naw'll just thinkin back like the top on the ride
    These other niggas slack Few feet to my mile
    I'm known coast to coast, my name is enforced
    Treat the beat like a roast, on the mic french toast
    Sweet taste sweet sound for your ears
    Smellin like a pound eyes lookin like a deer
    In the headlights but the truck missed
    Cause I'm standin right behind its no trick
    When will they realize that they can't touch this
    Maybe never, but hell or heaven
    Heads I sever with the lyrics no weapon
    Still bruised from the battle, but I'm ready to handle
    This a warning like a snake rattle, but I burn wax like a candle
    And these niggas can't fathiom but I'm still gone get at em
    Hook
    Verse 3
    Ok if verse two was the shot, this is the bullet
    And I'm gone knock off your socks when I do it
    Fuck niggas and fuck hos nobody matters
    Cause I'm the concrete rose grownin taller than ladders
    From hell I arose beat down and battered
    Scars on face, cloths burnt and tattered
    But I emerge a beast, enemies run and scatter
    Don't run you was just yappin ya crapper
    WHat the fuck happened, thought I was a horrible rapper?
    Wack, my flow was off, where the distractions
    You try to throw at me to eat my ego like cancer
    But you can't never stop m, like somebody cut the break line
    No break in my rhymes, I'm throwin up a few signs
    Read and weep, my lryics seep through pores to your brain
    For the weak spirits, call em whores with no game
    Even without the fame I'ma still spit the same

    Outro talking
    September 7th they gone know who it is
    MC_Crary I'm the muthafuckin biz


    I wanted to drop the first offical single from the tape today, but I'm still working on it. Everybody's spittin on this track already so I figured I'd put out my version.

    Feedback would be much appreciated.

    Last edited by MC_Crary; 08-15-2010, 02:55 AM.

  • #2
    Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

    Flow: Something seemed weird about it. It was good but there was something about the sound i think or timing of some things that threw it off (sorry i cant explain it better lol)
    Lyrics: Great cant complain about the lyrics bro keep it up
    Overall: 4.4/5

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    • #3
      Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

      Originally posted by cardenas4o9 View Post
      Flow: Something seemed weird about it. It was good but there was something about the sound i think or timing of some things that threw it off (sorry i cant explain it better lol)
      Lyrics: Great cant complain about the lyrics bro keep it up
      Overall: 4.4/5
      Might be the doubler on the hook or is it the vocals?

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      • #4
        Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

        pretty bad, y would you rhyme bich and bich, but ya the hook was weird, just put original on it



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        • #5
          Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

          Originally posted by WKinhere View Post
          pretty bad, y would you rhyme bich and bich, but ya the hook was weird, just put original on it
          Lol, it's called an internal rhyme, dumbass.


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          • #6
            Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

            Originally posted by WKinhere View Post
            pretty bad, y would you rhyme bich and bich, but ya the hook was weird, just put original on it
            Why would you spell bitch without the t, twice in a row lol. Nah, jk. The first two lines came to me they way I spit em. If the first two lines don't satisfy you read through the rest of the lyrics, you might find something you like.

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            • #7
              Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

              Flow: 3/5
              Lyrics: 4/5
              Overall: 4/5-You need to work more on the flow
              Check my beats out on : www.soundclick.com/tmzbeatz. T-M-Z on the muthafuckin' beat!

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              • #8
                Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

                Beat was tight. Flow really needed some work though. You took alot of unnecessary pauses in the middle of lines that made the line sound bad cause then you sped up the second part of it. If it was because you needed a breath you should try and get in a couple quick breaths at the end of lines. Lyrics could use some work too, use some multis to make the song sound better.

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                • #9
                  Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

                  Ha you should check lyrics again if you think theres no multies in there.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

                    I just listened to the whole verse and there was not one multi.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

                      Originally posted by Sentus View Post
                      I just listened to the whole verse and there was not one multi.
                      Verse 1
                      You hear the marchin band bitch
                      Second line marchin at your funeral bitch

                      Yeah I'm killa, thought I told you before
                      I'm so hot in street fights, nigga pray for snow
                      But nothin can put out the flame
                      Yes I did bang, but now I'm chillin gettin paid for the name
                      Niggas wishin they was wayne and t-pain,
                      But I'd rather be me, I stand in the game
                      Ball in one had, shoot to kill
                      One sec on the clock
                      Hold up one finger, when I shoot the rock
                      Now worries it goes swish, Crowd Cheers my name
                      MC-crary get it right, for I say it again
                      MC_Crary
                      oops, i say that shit all the time
                      but its earned, when you see a nigga grind
                      So dont even try to find a nigga thats better
                      Cause I'm fly no feather
                      My voice get a ho wetter

                      Thats just a simple multi.

                      Verse 2
                      I am so nasty, indecent exposure
                      Tell ya boy get at me if he needin the doisha

                      Naw'll just thinkin back like the top on the ride
                      These other niggas slack Few feet to my mile
                      I'm known coast to coast, my name is enforced
                      Treat the beat like a roast, on the mic french toast
                      Sweet taste sweet sound for your ears
                      Smellin like a pound eyes lookin like a deer
                      In the headlights but the truck missed
                      Cause I'm standin right behind its no trick
                      When will they realize that they can't touch this
                      Maybenever, but hell or heaven
                      Heads I sever with the lyrics no weapon
                      Still bruised from the battle, but I'm ready to handle
                      This a warning like a snake rattle, but I burn wax like a candle
                      And these niggas can't fathiom but I'm still gone get at em


                      When you do a multi you dont have to just out it at the end of the verse, it can be done all over the lines and thats how I choose to write my multis.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

                        I'll give you indecent exposure/needed the doisha and no feather/ho wetter. But lines like
                        Sweet taste sweet sound for your ears
                        Smellin like a pound eyes lookin like a deer

                        Can't count as a multi because what comes inbetween the words don't rhyme. Therefore you're just rhyming a word at the end of the line and the middle of the line. It's two different lines, not one multi

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