Young S - Successful

[WeezyFcrazY]

just wanna say somthing pissing me off lol
i see these cats who could care less about lil wayne
who are here just to get exposure in the studio form
THIS IS A LIL WAYNE FORUM PEOPLE , i just wanted to say that i know most of ya'll don't give a shit but ehhhh nvm ..

2nd song i post, 2 verses, Hope u like it

LimeLinx - Preview - Successful1.mp3



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[chapweezy]

Re: Young S - Successful

idk bout this its ight. The autotune kinda ruined it. I like the line where you " i want the money,cars,and clothes but fuck those hoes" haha
practice and youll be good.

[WeezyFcrazY]

Re: Young S - Successful

haha thanx man, btw the autotune was just on like for the ending of the first verse

[ATLien666]

Re: Young S - Successful

The autotune was horrible, and was a huge distraction through the entire first verse. Your voice also sounds kinda weird, idk what it is, but it's semi-annoying.

Flow- Was sorta on point. 2/5

Lyrics- Honestly, I couldn't hear most of it, but what I heard was okay. 2/5

Overall- 2/5

[WeezyFcrazY]

Re: Young S - Successful

damn, guess nobody sees u the way u see ur self i thought it was decent
but thanks alot for ur feedback

[ATLien666]

Re: Young S - Successful

damn, guess nobody sees u the way u see ur self i thought it was decent
but thanks alot for ur feedback

Lol, true shit, but nah, it is decent. Just cut the autotune, and it would be better.

[Pestrator]

Re: Young S - Successful

this was allright lyrics were okay flwo didnt seem on it sememd jumbled so work on ur lfow n lyrics n with time n alot of practice ull be good

[WeezyFcrazY]

Re: Young S - Successful

@ATLien666 alright bro
@Pestrator Thx i'll keep that in mind

[Sentus]

Re: Young S - Successful

Looks like you talking to me bro ahahahahaha

Anyway main problem I see is the delivery, delivery was pretty bad and made the song hard to listen to, the autotune was fucking horrible but besides that you just need to spit things clearer and not purposely try to do that fucked up Lil Wayne voice. You sound alot better with just a more straightforward delivery.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Young S - Successful

i like how u dont give a fuck, and let out your emotions on this bro.

i fux wit the autotune.

u have a unique delilvery, and express emotion well.

nice metaphors and descriptions as well.

i'd say 5/5 , your unique and unorthodox, so thats a plus.

[indiglo09]

Re: Young S - Successful

Your need to change the key of your autotune to match the beat man, it'll sound a lot better once u do that