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  • Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

    Hello all out there, i hope you guys could help me i little, just give me a comment on a lyric i wrote, that would be very cool. I hope you like it, be free and say your opinion
    Its me, im Prince Joint

    Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live
    Lyric :

    Verse 1 :
    I'd always tried to look on the bride side of life
    But sometimes its hard, when you aint seen a single light
    I've always been fresh, just sometimes im out of mind
    Love is the spirit, speaking for myself, is that right?
    I gotta go with family first, music second, friends third -
    Still high, sky fly, like a bird
    Love spending time and just do me, sit back, smoke my weed -
    and just relax.

    Chorus :
    Gotta live while i got life, day for day, living for today -
    Not for tomorrow or yesterday
    Get out in the world and get payed
    Humans all over the world, why treat them like slaves
    I dont understand it, violence and shit, is it just me?
    Think about love, life and live, - be free.

    Verse 2:
    We could start life over and over, again and again
    See through the wind of life, and forget the pain
    Think about love not dead, its running in your vein
    Sometimes its hard, i know, sometimes are days just the same
    But remember, we all love you, no need to hide the pain
    Respect them who you love, pay them with your love

    Love is your life, just try to live

    Chorus :
    Gotta live while i got life, day for day, living for today -
    Not for tomorrow or yesterday
    Get out in the world and get payed
    Humans all over the world, why treat them like slaves
    I dont understand it, violence and shit, is it just me?
    Think about love, life and live, - be free.

    Feedback :
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...title-lol.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-die-fast.html
    Last edited by Tunechi4Life; 08-25-2010, 12:12 PM.
    i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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    Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

    No feedback left. Locked.

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    • #3
      Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

      No one wanna reply to this? is is just shit?
      i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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      • #4
        Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

        It was a good read
        You got some jewels in this one, P.
        You were than i was a couple years ago at writing lyrics...
        I know you might be an aspiring so I'mma let you know a lil secret
        verses are usually organized in 12s or 16s
        and choruses are always 8 (Unless you doin Drake's Best I Ever Had)
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        • #5
          Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

          Originally posted by morphineroberts View Post
          It was a good read
          You got some jewels in this one, P.
          You were than i was a couple years ago at writing lyrics...
          I know you might be an aspiring so I'mma let you know a lil secret
          verses are usually organized in 12s or 16s
          and choruses are always 8 (Unless you doin Drake's Best I Ever Had)
          thanks man!! im taking these words with, for sure
          i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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          • #6
            Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

            Why do people post lyrics in the studio, there's obviously a writers block section right above this for posting lyrics?

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            • #7
              Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

              Originally posted by Sentus View Post
              Why do people post lyrics in the studio, there's obviously a writers block section right above this for posting lyrics?
              you could also ask yourself why people do live on this earth... its the same question, just in a different way. (its because its suppose to be in here, read the rules, then youll get it)
              i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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              • #8
                Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

                Originally posted by Tunechi4Life View Post
                you could also ask yourself why people do live on this earth... its the same question, just in a different way. (its because its suppose to be in here, read the rules, then youll get it)
                Good one, Tune. I really respect the lyricism, pimpin. Dont let em stop the shine
                SHAROYCE THE DON X The Catalyst (5 song EP) DOWNLOAD NOW

                http://sharoyceantwanakashakeantweezy.bandcamp.com
                http://tishare.com/3s4xbahdnl5b.htm
                http://www70.zippyshare.com/v/45564702/file.html
                http://ul.to/ewbrppdd
                http://www.downloadamixtape.com/?pag...ixtape_id=4387
                http://www.putlocker.com/file/7ECEF496587518A
                http://filepost.com/files/c4cb9165/SHAROYCE_DA_DON!_[5_SONG_EP].zip/

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                • #9
                  Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life & Live [Im New In This]

                  Originally posted by morphineroberts View Post
                  Good one, Tune. I really respect the lyricism, pimpin. Dont let em stop the shine
                  respect to my friend <-- holla at this boy!
                  i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life &amp; Live [Im New In This]

                    Flow: it was good, from the flow in my head from reading it. Haha
                    Lyrics: were nice, kinda deep meaning to em
                    Other: record it then we're in business
                    Overall: 3/5. not bad

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                    • #11
                      Re: Prince Joint - Love, Life &amp; Live [Im New In This]

                      Originally posted by DreezyBaby View Post
                      Flow: it was good, from the flow in my head from reading it. Haha
                      Lyrics: were nice, kinda deep meaning to em
                      Other: record it then we're in business
                      Overall: 3/5. not bad
                      thanks man!
                      i gonna record this as soon i get a better mic.. like very soon, in the end of this month i think
                      but i respect and take your words to me
                      i stay smoking bud, im marijuana motivated.

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