Jrock23 vs Liljay (Jrock23 Won)

[JrockHQ]

First round, two sets of 16-20 Verses

My first Verse

Liljay i dont know you, you may be new
i guess im the teacher about to take you for a loop
you made one big mistake, and that was siging up
little did you know you where battling the great white hope
people like you is the reason why nas said hip hop is dead
i dug Hip Hop up out the grave placed her on a platfrom
full of my rap slaves. On a mission to infect mankind with twisted diction
Write prescriptions for the mentals of all those that listen
Comprehensive expedition for this plague on paper
Rhyme raper, pen and pad my accomplices on the caper
Violator, slap up the mic then spit out of spite
Wipe my chin then wander off engulfed by the night
Hide in plain sight like Mike Myers, set the world on fire
Through the wire like Kanye West without a vest
Lyrical militant, ink blot flows, semi belligerent
Bagging up uncut dope lines with diligence
I guess i ended up in the wrong musical class
your on elementary school status, im a rap college professor
teaching these students the meaning of a lyrical Domination infection

[koolkiddale13]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Damn nigga.
Youh murdered that shit!

[IAmJay]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

First round, two sets of 16-20 Verses

My first Verse

Liljay i dont know you, you may be new
i guess im the teacher about to take you for a loop
you made one big mistake, and that was siging up
little did you know you where battling the great white hope
people like you is the reason why nas said hip hop is dead
i dug Hip Hop up out the grave placed her on a platfrom
full of my rap slaves. On a mission to infect mankind with twisted diction
Write prescriptions for the mentals of all those that listen
Comprehensive expedition for this plague on paper
Rhyme raper, pen and pad my accomplices on the caper
Violator, slap up the mic then spit out of spite
Wipe my chin then wander off engulfed by the night
Hide in plain sight like Mike Myers, set the world on fire
Through the wire like Kanye West without a vest
Lyrical militant, ink blot flows, semi belligerent
Bagging up uncut dope lines with diligence
I guess i ended up in the wrong musical class
your on elementary school status, im a rap college professor
teaching these students the meaning of a lyrical Domination infection

Ok ok, I like it my niggah. Let me see how I do.

Motha fucka check my rank, I'm a sergeant
I'm in this rap tournament, and Jrock23 is my first target
he claims he's the best rapper in this site,
yeah right, man I'm not going down without a fight
you said you dug Hip-Hop out her grave
you entering this tournament, you must be brave
but I'm lyrically insane, I'm a damn beast
I can't be tamed, I'm the teacher and I got
to teach you a lesson, to never rap here again
and that's the final session, ha and I'ma leave
this round with a victory, and I am meaning
that literally, you can't come against me
I can be your meanest enemy, and I'ma on a mission
to succeed, I'ma be in the top of this rap game, in the lead
and you coming at me with all these sorry blows
but yet I still can't follow your flow, your rhymes
are pretty good but I still need to teach you
because if I don't, these other rappers will eat you
talking about you a damn professor,
but who knows, you can be like MJ a molester
ha, and I don't need a alliance, I'm a one man team
I'll melt your ass like if you had steam
yeah bitch I'm ill, I'm the best and I'ma king still
and I'm running out of words
but you must admit, this best shit you ever heard,
so Jrock this was a good round but no doubt I advance
you already said what you had too and this is your last chance.
ha, now I'm out, and let me get the hell out this bout.

I'm done.

[koolkiddale13]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Damn brah.!
Liljay killed it!
Idk who to pick.
Ya'll BOTH Sick..

[JrockHQ]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Alight final verse round 2 of this battle, good stuff jay.


ima spit that real quick shit
flip the script bitch
you may have a candle of talent im a flame thrower
im a hurricane when i rhyme your just a tame blower
i been reignin supreme on HQ
ever since i was wit the kings
but now i turned in my crown fitted
and now upon Gods throne im sitted
on every one of you fakes liljay is a example of how to get shitted!
the talent i bring is like every crew times 2
multiply by 4, square root of above shit is about to hit the floor
if i keep goin like this every nigga will be ridin my dick
theres some homo thugs on this site
and i set my sites on u niggas with they eyes wide
jay think ima bring his demise
naw nigga i spit strait genocide
i hate when bitch niggas try to throw dirt on my name
like i wont leave em lyrically slain
raps a jungle and im lyrically insane and untamed
After reading your lyrics and rhymes i have come to a conclusion
R.I.P to hip hop every since the 1979
as it was leanin towards rappin about thugs and gats
and sellin drugs out ya backpacks
you know what? FUCK YOUR SHIT... ITS ALL WACK
when i feel like rap gets on sum real shit then ill come back...
have fun readin more wack raps about the "clickin and clacks"
and broke niggas who supposedly got 26"s on they "cadillacs"
Liljay meet ur fate, lyrical thunder
you racist stunter ima chaseless hunter
cuz ur attempts to flee are a fatal blunder
another fucked new comer
getting the boot by this verbal punter
rotted mind filled with lies what belies
an emcee career that dies,another idiot tries
to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize
fist that pulverize thru ya hateful eyes
im more vicious than kayla krunk be delicious
and my wishes be to eliminate thee, chop down ur growing tree
u an emcee, bitch please now drop to ya knees before i release the
real artillaries you feelin me
i put this down for my people
and i pray for you in the steeple
see no colors hear no evil
white,yellow,black are all my equal
dont talk ish you dont want my sequel

[IAmJay]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Alright, alright good bro.

You keep rapping but I advise you to stop
don't you know that you making a bad example of Hip-Hop
you see I'ma beast, and to me you just a troll
you fucking with me but I'ma show you how I really roll
your rhymes are whack, just quit this shit
after I'm done with this rap I'ma make you my bitch
haha, and my raps are fantastic, I'll kill you
and throw your ass in a attic
I don't spit fire, I spit lava and that's a fact
after all these battles you keep coming back
man you're about to get demolished and you know it
but you're scary ass to afraid to show it
you still a student you're not on my level
bitch I'm king and I'm bigger then the devil
yeah you got potential and talent
you still wana battle, but can you keep your balance
my name go by jay, and yet do you know that you can make me go away
and yes I will slay you and bury you underground
this is the second verse, and I'ma advance to the 2nd round
I'm done going against you, it's not even worth my time
because I'm tired of spitting lines, and tired of spitting rhymes
ha, I will kill you lyrically, motha fucker don't you see
that the beast is in me
I'm dangerous motha fucka, I could commit homicide
so it will be best for you to commit suicide
and my mind is tired of thinking what to say
just know I ain't going away, because my name is jay
BITCH!

[MoneyIsEverything]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Both yall ripped it up, Truth.

[JrockHQ]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay

Both yall ripped it up, Truth.

Yo thx

[burnout]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay [Vote]

Lyircs=Jrock

Disses=Jrock

Flow=lilJay

Punchlines=Jrock

Metaphors=Tie

Vote=Jrock23

Both went it though

[IAmJay]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay [Vote]

Yeah, I think Jrock got me in the second round but oh well.

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay [Vote]

Lyircs=Jrock

Disses=Jrock

Flow=lilJay

Punchlines=Jrock

Metaphors=Tie

Vote=Jrock23

Both went it though

Lol, easily liljay had way more disses, and there's not much difference between a diss and a punchline except a punch is usually more clever...lmao

My vote goes to liljay, more punches and the such, jrock had so many damn fillers in his first rap it ruined it. The only thing I found unfair is that it stated 16-20 bars yet liljay obviously didn't follow that, so I don't know what to say about that... so I guess I won't vote because it's unfair kind of I suppose.

[Patriarch]

Re: Jrock23 vs Liljay [Vote]

I pretty much agree with what Trill said. Jrock's second verse was unnecessarily long and filler/tangent filled. Liljay kept it simple, but that was good enough.

***Hahaha. Jrock closes the poll and manages to win another anonymous vote.