I Really Mean It.

[ATLien666]

Yeah, I already know, I needa get a new mic, I'm tryin', lol. I been shopping a lot, recently, yk, school and all.

First song off my prequel mixtape, "No Apologies."


YouTube - I Really Mean It

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[MC_Crary]

Re: I Really Mean It.

This is a great track man. The best one I've heard from you so far.

Flow: At some points you were trying to fit in too may syllables, but for the most part you were on.
Lyrics: Great lyrics. Killed the multis and good rhyme scheme.
Other: Youre mic doesnt sound bad you just need better mastering. Some eq on the vocals would help alot. And noise reduction on the hiss.

4/5

[ATLien666]

Re: I Really Mean It.

This is a great track man. The best one I've heard from you so far.

Flow: At some points you were trying to fit in too may syllables, but for the most part you were on.
Lyrics: Great lyrics. Killed the multis and good rhyme scheme.
Other: Youre mic doesnt sound bad you just need better mastering. Some eq on the vocals would help alot. And noise reduction on the hiss.

4/5

Cool, right on, man. I'll try to work on the mastering, too.

[ATLien666]

Re: I Really Mean It.

I can't get any feedback? lol

[ProBitaz.]

Re: I Really Mean It.

I can't get any feedback? lol

I'ma give it a listin'.. 2 sec

EDIT:
Flow: 3/5 It was off the beat too many times. It's aight when u go off, but not to many times though. (I liked to "no-beat" end.)
Lyrics: 4.5/5 Really really good, sounded almost professional!
Other: The beat is kinda nice, and fits pretty good with ya voice. = 4/5

[Pestrator]

Re: I Really Mean It.

not a bad track its started out good flow wise but then u feel off but this ur best track yet. Keep it all up 3/5

[DreezyBaby]

Re: I Really Mean It.

Flow: like dude said, sometimes its off, but when you going, it's right as fuck
Lyrics: Dope bro, goood shit. I agree with pest
Other: just make sure you stay on track with your flow, you'll be set
Overall:4.3/5

[ATLien666]

Re: I Really Mean It.

Right on for the feedback, everybody!