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    This is off my Upcoming tape that is almost finished. Have recorded a crap load a tracks, that will be uploaded soon. This is one of the many. This is not the kind of music I usually write/record, but it was worth trying it out. feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!

    Paradox - Your Return


    (verse: Paradox)
    ever since you left, I been right here, stranded all alone.
    won't lie, sometimes I get the feeling, that I won't make it on my own,
    but with this new found confidence, I believe I can go to greater distances.
    never did I stop and question, where things went wrong.
    our love was sunrise young, but didn't last that long,
    died a painful death, didn't even take its last breath.
    and now

    (chorus: Kevin Rudolf)

    (verse: Paradox)
    this world is a cheater, that is why life is never fair,
    you get what you want, then you lose what you got.
    I was forced believe that true love existed,
    and maybe it does but I kind of feel, that this girl put me through the wrong experience.
    and I'm losing it, losing it,
    losing it, losing it,
    losing it, losing it
    I feel I' am in a trace,


    feedback:
    Dreezy - Teach Me How To Get Money
    Dynamic - All or Nothing




    Gemma Arterton

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    Re: Paradox - Your Return

    Dude. I don't know what to say. We gotta do some work together man. I love this. Niggas ain't really gonna fuck with it man but this is one some rap Eric Clapton shit man. Perfect.

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    • #3
      Re: Paradox - Your Return

      eric clapton LMAO. thanks bro. we def have to collab. i have some tracks you might want to get on.

      Gemma Arterton

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      • #4
        Re: Paradox - Your Return

        No but for real man, not saying voice wise. Just the way you speak on the track you know? Idk how to describe it lol.

        Oh and send em my way

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        • #5
          Re: Paradox - Your Return

          not a bad song its pretty good u have a diff voice and style of singing i like it bro keep it up

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          • #6
            Re: Paradox - Your Return

            appreciate the feedbacck bro^^

            Gemma Arterton

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            • #7
              Re: Paradox - Your Return

              Flow - 6/10
              Lyrics - 6/10
              Other - Everything was alright, this was my first time hearing you so maybe i gotta' get use to your voice.

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