Monster Freestyle...

[Cli-City]

I heard Dreezy and that nigga inspired me to try a lil thing...I dont have a mic or nothing so this is my mic on my Mac and garage band..but if you read the lyrics while listening it makes sense....


LimeLinx - Preview - My Song 12.mp3

[Cli-City]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

Cli- City
Yea Im here
huhumm

Yeah…bout to go bisserk on em
I just saved hip hop…I went to church on em
But imma murder this beat put a hearse on it
the beat called up like nigga put a verse on it
these niggas soft better off with a purse on em
the way they taking L’s you swore I put a curse on em
You unemployed, me I go to work on em
Slaughter house so I guess I had to order the pork on em
First off niggas man nigga im in beast mode
Im bout to beat the game no cheat codes
Got em gasping for air, the way we balling in the club
You would’ve swore a nigga asking for hair
Ha..yea…flow sick doe sicker
the rozay spilling for the underground niggas
the hoes aint sitting on the coupe seats
the top open up the bitch asked me if the roof speaks
hell nah…only money talks and if you aint speaking
then shut your flap jack before you start leaking
the rhyme is contagious the beat it’ll keep sneezing
now tell me a beat that I aint got on and start wheezing…
I’ll wait…time up motherfucker
Im way at the top time climb up motherfucker
Got that green on my mind…like a Celtics cap fitted
if a nigga talking crazy I bet this hand hit em
Just a bunch of soft niggas…and they playing bad mitten
Im a big dog barking at you little ass kittens
I get star bucks niggas…I aint talking cappuchino
Im a boss like al pachino…keep them chips like a casino….or doritoes
Got a bitch she say she came from Puerto Rico…drive a nigga straight nuts…now im on
That…pi….sta…..chi……o
Money is the answer….and I got alotta questions
Got a deaf ear to broke..Never heard the word recession
F.A.B my team…I see my money in my dreams
And if a nigga claim King..then im coming for your queen
Just like a prostitute, I’m coming for the green
Virgin Islands in this mother fucker.. nah mean
Im all about the bread, all about the cream…I got money out the ass
…yea my diarrhea green
Im up next niggas man check my advance
With more punchlines than your high school dance

[morphineroberts]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

Cli- City
Yea Im here
huhumm

Yeah…bout to go bisserk on em
I just saved hip hop…I went to church on em
But imma murder this beat put a hearse on it
the beat called up like nigga put a verse on it
these niggas soft better off with a purse on em
the way they taking L’s you swore I put a curse on em
You unemployed, me I go to work on em
Slaughter house so I guess I had to order the pork on em
First off niggas man nigga im in beast mode
Im bout to beat the game no cheat codes
Got em gasping for air, the way we balling in the club
You would’ve swore a nigga asking for hair
Ha..yea…flow sick doe sicker
the rozay spilling for the underground niggas
the hoes aint sitting on the coupe seats
the top open up the bitch asked me if the roof speaks
hell nah…only money talks and if you aint speaking
then shut your flap jack before you start leaking
the rhyme is contagious the beat it’ll keep sneezing
now tell me a beat that I aint got on and start wheezing…
I’ll wait…time up motherfucker
Im way at the top time climb up motherfucker
Got that green on my mind…like a Celtics cap fitted
if a nigga talking crazy I bet this hand hit em
Just a bunch of soft niggas…and they playing bad mitten
Im a big dog barking at you little ass kittens
I get star bucks niggas…I aint talking cappuchino
Im a boss like al pachino…keep them chips like a casino….or doritoes
Got a bitch she say she came from Puerto Rico…drive a nigga straight nuts…now im on
That…pi….sta…..chi……o
Money is the answer….and I got alotta questions
Got a deaf ear to broke..Never heard the word recession
F.A.B my team…I see my money in my dreams
And if a nigga claim King..then im coming for your queen
Just like a prostitute, I’m coming for the green
Virgin Islands in this mother fucker.. nah mean
Im all about the bread, all about the cream…I got money out the ass
…yea my diarrhea green
Im up next niggas man check my advance
With more punchlines than your high school dance

I felt like you took a shot at me in line 7
my mixtape is called the unemployment project
I really enjoyed the track
Lyrics were 5/5
Delivery was 4.8/5
You did the damn thing

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

daaamn. Inspired you? nigga you ripped this shit.
Flow: was dope, give it 4/5
Lyrics: 4/5
Other: i'd listen to more if you make more songs.
Overall: 4/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

Ha just wanted to say I find it funny that the first three comments are all gonna be the people on my version of this track.

Flow: Was great man. Stayed on point throughout.
Lyrics: Perfect Great multis and internal rhymes man.
Other: Other than the quality this is perfect man. You got something there man, got any other tracks?

[Cli-City]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

Thanks I'll Try to do some more......

[mykill]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

I agree with everyone else. That was one killer freestyle. Let's see you record some tracks a bit better. One thing I did early on just to get some tracks done was I bought a cheap wal-mart karaoke mic, just so I had some semblance of a microphone. Worked out decently enough until I got my new pro one. only 10 bucks too.

Overall 4/5. good job

[Cli-City]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

I agree with everyone else. That was one killer freestyle. Let's see you record some tracks a bit better. One thing I did early on just to get some tracks done was I bought a cheap wal-mart karaoke mic, just so I had some semblance of a microphone. Worked out decently enough until I got my new pro one. only 10 bucks too.

Overall 4/5. good job

Do You Just Buy a mic.....I mean buying a pro mic right now aint a problem I just figured I needed more than that....

[mykill]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

if you can buy a good mic, DO IT. get some good headphones too. I think garageband is good enough recording software long as you have beats, and even then it itself can make pro beats too so, you'd be set really if you'd just buy a good mic

[Tunechi4Life]

Re: Monster Freestyle...

i like this one, no more to say!