Don't Break My Heart.

[ATLien666]

YouTube - Don't Break My Heart.

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[DreezyBaby]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

haha catchy shit man.
Flow: was nice, the hook caught your flow well, which made it more enjoyable
Lyrics: pretty simple, in a poetic way. should've slowed down in some parts bro lol
Other: keep it up! Doing your thang bro
Overall: 3.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

Flow: Your flows getting better man. Few parts were you seemed off beat, but since there's so many tempo changes you get a pass lol.
Lyrics: I like your wordplay man. As far as lyrics go you pretty good. You have your own style. Liked the buffy the vampire slayin line alot.

3.5/5

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

This almost sounds professional man! -U should be famous..

[mykill]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

the beat is all over the place. not bad necessarily, but i dont like beats without good direction. its not bad though

Flow: C, getting there. but there's a lotta opportunities you coulda slowed down to make things flow better. one problem i have personally is that I try to fit too many words into one line. I've had to learn to simplify some of my thoughts to the bare necessities in order to fit the rhyme scheme.
Lyrics: A-, all good there, goes well with the theme of the song. Nice job. Remember what I said about simplifying. Dont dumb it down completely, but fix it up where it flows better

Overall: 3/5, I'm hoping that when the Mixtape comes out, I'll be able to see how well you've developed. keep going and going forward

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

Thanks for the feedback, I'mma take it to heart, and still work on my flow.

My first mixtape should be out tomorrow or Tuesdsay.

[ATLien666]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

Can I get a lil' more feedback?

[Pestrator]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

not a bad song bro i liek ur lyrics on here bc they r poem like n ur flow has improved u just needed to slow down overall on this beat imo bc ur flwo is oto fast on this beat but it aint bad just work on ur flow n keep the lyrics coming bro! 3/5

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

Flow - Seemed like it was all over the place. Some points were on, then some were off. So it just didn't seem right to me.
Lyrics - Were good, best part of the track. On topic throughout.
Other - Used to love this song back in the day! You're getting better though.
Overall - 3/5.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Don't Break My Heart.

This was a banger in sheep's clothing. You did yo thang on it. My ear told me that you were what this joint needed. I visited you're site because i wanted to hear more of you, J. Fire shit Mc Burninz hot
You need to post the lyrics to it.