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  • Right Above it - Mikee

    This is just a verse i wrote to Right Above it. NO STUPID COMMENTS. Im just 15 so bare with me ...

    Now holla if u hear me if u dont then try to kill me
    but dont waste your time bro, cus ur too low to even see me
    and producers if u feel me hit me up to get to dealing
    learned to ignore all the hater if i dont then it will bring me
    opposite side of the ceiling
    And Uhhh
    i'll do anything to be famous
    REWIND!
    almost anything for me to be on television
    one day it has to happen
    & not to sound cocky
    but im goin to the top no fuckin bodys gonna stop me
    if i gotta kill ill kill em
    or work every day im wit it
    i dont call it desperation
    i just call it go-gettin
    so, ima go get it
    like my lifes depending on it
    taking breaks is just a myth so i just spit until i vomit
    money flow is kinda fast i think i need a bigger wallet
    to be honest it wont fit if i split it in every pocket
    & i dont do drugs
    i dont need to cus i am one
    u tryna see ya kids then pay the motha fuckin ransom
    if not then ima curl a finger around the handgun
    bullets fold a bitch nigga in half
    Samsung !



    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...cko-maybe.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...irst-step.html

  • #2
    Re: Right Above it - Mikee

    aint bad lil man keep workin on it and maybe youll get up there


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    • #3
      Re: Right Above it - Mikee

      Try a different rhyme scheme instead of rhyming the same words,not bad good job.
      I look in the flames and see the hotter me.

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      • #4
        Re: Right Above it - Mikee

        i liked some parts.. but others were kinda off.
        Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
        I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
        Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
        You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
        Empty the clip then roll the window up
        Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
        I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
        Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
        That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
        Dark shades EazyE
        Five letter YMCMB
        Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
        I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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        • #5
          Re: Right Above it - Mikee

          not bad, just work more creative lines and practice on a less boring rhyme scheme
          YOU NIGGAS PUSSIES, CAMELTOES

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