Young Corruption- I Hope She Likes Me

[Young Corruption]

this is my thrid song ever recording. i just bought a mic yesterday night and why not post it in here. it is better than my other two but let me know what i can work out

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EDIT: this is a quick 1 verse song too

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Young Corruption- I Hope She Likes Me

Flow - Was kinda off. Should try to speed it up alittle more on a beat like this. And try to put more words in each line, to let it flow better.
Lyrics - Lyrics were nice, on point. You just started rapping but as you improve the lyrics will get better too.
Other - Quality is dope like I told you before! Thats a good way to start off, cause then you just gotta worry about improving your actual rapping rather than rapping and production. Try to give more energy like I said! But with all that said, this is only a song from your first day of rapping, you'll improve buddy!

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption- I Hope She Likes Me

yeah man thanks for the feedback. i'm trying to but more emotion into it but it feels weird. i guess that will past as i continue and yeah i know i need to work on the flow and lyrics. but like i said thanks for the feedback. i was messing with effects for shits and giggles and its actually pretty damn fun. looking for more plug-ins

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Young Corruption- I Hope She Likes Me

yeah man thanks for the feedback. i'm trying to but more emotion into it but it feels weird. i guess that will past as i continue and yeah i know i need to work on the flow and lyrics. but like i said thanks for the feedback. i was messing with effects for shits and giggles and its actually pretty damn fun. looking for more plug-ins

Yeah man. I was the exact same way to be honest lol. It will just take time to be comfortable on the mic. And yeah man, recording is really fun lol. Sometimes when I'm high and bored I'll just get a random instrumental and freestyle in autotune over it lol. Never release those songs though lol. But yeah man, I'll continue checking out your shit and looking for improvement! Keep it up man.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption- I Hope She Likes Me

haha was actually thinking about doing that tonight. but alright badass thanks man