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    I go hard in the mufuckin' paint brah
    Roll an eighth up, smokin' only dank brah
    See, Imma kill all of these rappers with my wordplay
    Take 'em back to school mayne like they in the first grade
    And when I say I'm killin' this, believe its in the worst way
    Reppin' for the 8-50, do it for my birth place
    Get the booth shakin' up like there was an earthquake
    If they say I ain't hot, thats false info you heard 'em say
    Uhh, and Imma beast when it comes to this
    Cause I got you all sayin' damn before the verse play
    Uh, and you know I'm fuckin' killin' this
    Its that all natural flow, yeah I stay real as shit
    And shout out to my haters, y'all better just chill and dip
    Cause if you comin' with negativy, seal your lips
    Uh, but now I'm on that new shit
    If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip
    THPs my crew, we a tribe on a quest
    And we stay equipped with 16's, its the survival of the best mothafucker
    But I ain't gunna take a break
    Room smellin' like teen sprit, I'm about to paint my face
    And my team stay winnin' shit, yeah we in a race
    But we were born to do this so I guess its all fate
    And I go hard in the mufuckin' paint
    I go hard when you mufuckers can't
    I stay high as a mothafuckin' plane
    I'm so raw thats why you mothafuckers hate

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    Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

    Flow: couldn't have been on point than you were
    Lyrics: "See, Imma kill all of these rappers with my wordplay / Take 'em back to school mayne like they in the first grade", "Uh, but now I'm on that new shit
    If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip" and the last 4 bars were to me what stood out of the track the most.
    Other: the song overall was straight dope. top of list on my ipod man. truly good shit
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    • #3
      Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

      Originally posted by snowman99 View Post
      Flow: couldn't have been on point than you were
      Lyrics: "See, Imma kill all of these rappers with my wordplay / Take 'em back to school mayne like they in the first grade", "Uh, but now I'm on that new shit
      If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip" and the last 4 bars were to me what stood out of the track the most.
      Other: the song overall was straight dope. top of list on my ipod man. truly good shit
      Thanks man! And glad you liked the Q-Tip line. It actually has a double meaning lol. Cause in the next line I mention "Tribe On A Quest, which is actually a hip hop group. And theres a member in the group who's name is Q-Tip lol. But glad you liked it man. This is my first track I've recorded since "Go To Sleep" since I was sick all last week. But I've been writing alot. Gunna try to put out like one song a week till my mixtape drops. Which should be some next month!



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        Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

        haha well no shit. i didn't know that. and here i thought it was just a clever little line lol. and damn well thats good that your better now and you came back hard. lol a new song a week.. thats gonna be dope. like the good friday type shit. get ppl all hyped up for the mixtape
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          Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

          Flow: I like your style and flow, you got the nice rapper voice no homo that sounds good with any beat really haha
          Lyrics: Your lyrics were beast in this. Like snowman said the last couple bars were the most memorable for me. Shit was dope.
          Overall: 5/5 It was good all around , you killed it as usual keep it YF

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            Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

            Originally posted by snowman99 View Post
            haha well no shit. i didn't know that. and here i thought it was just a clever little line lol. and damn well thats good that your better now and you came back hard. lol a new song a week.. thats gonna be dope. like the good friday type shit. get ppl all hyped up for the mixtape
            Hahaha yeah man! I always try to put as much thought into my rhymes as I can. And yeah, thats what this is kinda like, the Good Friday thing. But its also me just trying to record and get better as much as I can before doing the mixtape. And putting out music frequently I'm hoping for some feedback so I can make this mixtape the best I can you know? But thanks for checking it out man!

            Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
            Flow: I like your style and flow, you got the nice rapper voice no homo that sounds good with any beat really haha
            Lyrics: Your lyrics were beast in this. Like snowman said the last couple bars were the most memorable for me. Shit was dope.
            Overall: 5/5 It was good all around , you killed it as usual keep it YF
            Hahah thanks man! Glad you enjoyed this! I just left feedback on your song for you bro!



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              Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

              Wheres the feedback!



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              • #8
                Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

                feelin this one! shit was mad dope. good lines throughout, kept a steady nice flow. you even put a little more emotions in your words.

                "but now I'm on that new shit
                If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip"

                ^^^ favorite line.

                goodjob.


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                • #9
                  Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

                  Originally posted by blownoffkush View Post
                  feelin this one! shit was mad dope. good lines throughout, kept a steady nice flow. you even put a little more emotions in your words.

                  "but now I'm on that new shit
                  If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip"

                  ^^^ favorite line.

                  goodjob.
                  Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!



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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

                    Flow: I liked your flow on this track, It fit the beat perfectly.
                    Lyrics: Best lyrics I've heard from you in a while, I was very impressed. Nice punchlines.
                    Overall: 5.5 - Good job dude, Expect to hear more music from you in the future.


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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

                      Originally posted by YoungTune. View Post
                      Flow: I liked your flow on this track, It fit the beat perfectly.
                      Lyrics: Best lyrics I've heard from you in a while, I was very impressed. Nice punchlines.
                      Overall: 5.5 - Good job dude, Expect to hear more music from you in the future.
                      Thanks man. Probably get drop something this weekend/early next week. Its gunna cause some controversy.



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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Hard In The Paint

                        Damn, been on the lookout for more new music by you and shit. This was worth the wait. The flow was crazy good. It was so on point. The lyrics... I didnt like how you said "Eight fifty" I think if you said "Reppin for the eight five o" would sound better but nbd. My favorite line:
                        And I go hard in the mufuckin' paint
                        I go hard when you mufuckers can't
                        I stay high as a mothafuckin' plane
                        I'm so raw thats why you mothafuckers hate

                        10/5

                        (It sounded like you started singing at the beginning of the last line )
                        Last edited by shbasketball12; 10-06-2010, 05:21 PM.

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