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  • Noble - Yep

    New song by me. Bonus song by my homie J-Money at the bottom. Feedback on both songs is appreciated! Will return feedback!

    This that lava shit
    They say they spittin' flame, well you know I spit that hotter shit
    And the respect of the vet's is what I gotta get
    Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit
    Any verse, I slaughter it, you best remember that
    I be spittin' so much heat, now they just prayin' for winter back
    All these lame rappers, need to learn how to act
    You think if you naming yourself Pheonix, that'll put you on the map?
    Hell no!, and y'all dont have no cells bro
    In your fucking body, that could ever help you sale bro
    And the truth is, rapper's actin' like they ruthless
    Song's so shitty, like they dont know what a booth is
    And you ain't a killin' shit, but neither is your crew bitch
    But my music does the talkin', it'll leave you toothless
    My verses light shit up, this a candle rap
    I'm steady come with the flame, I know yall cant handle that
    I'm a beast, do shit you cant teach
    Life is such a beach, man fuck it where my sandals at
    And yeah I exposed you, to prove you ain't shit
    So logged up on your Facebook and took me off your friends list
    What a bitch, and you tryna get rich
    You a fucking nobody, you shouldn't exist
    But shit, thats enough talk 'bout these lame spitters
    Its all jokes on these clowns, but I aint never playin' with ya
    And a plane will get you, high as fuck
    But so will a doobie, so its time to roll up
    But my crews headin' for the top, I know you see improvement
    But when we look up at these other crews and they still ain't movin'
    Hah, yep THP for life
    We always in the booth just to make sure that theres more light
    In this game, stay shinin' like lamp
    All I hear is Rocky music I guess I'm the champ
    Yep

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    Feedback #1
    Feedback #2


    J-Money - Where I'm From (Download/Stream)



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    Yep >>>>

    so fucking fire.
    your quality to me seems like its stepped way the fuck up.
    your vocals are fucking dope man, good mixing

    but anyways, the track is dope as hell. your flow was on point. and your shots at the "lames" were
    entertaining. smh at the lames who deleted you off facebook, they be hatin man..

    and J$ spits fire on that track, dude is sooo ill. his vibe on tracks is just crazy. tell him to get ready for a THP/FTP collab!

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    • #3
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      Originally posted by Mr. FTP View Post
      Yep >>>>

      so fucking fire.
      your quality to me seems like its stepped way the fuck up.
      your vocals are fucking dope man, good mixing

      but anyways, the track is dope as hell. your flow was on point. and your shots at the "lames" were
      entertaining. smh at the lames who deleted you off facebook, they be hatin man..

      and J$ spits fire on that track, dude is sooo ill. his vibe on tracks is just crazy. tell him to get ready for a THP/FTP collab!
      Appreciate that my dude. And yeah I got these 3 new VSTS that make my quality sooooo much better. Its crazy!



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      • #4
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        not my style of lyrics but its pretty nice, i like the flow with it
        YOU NIGGAS PUSSIES, CAMELTOES

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        • #5
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          very nice my dude! this verse was prolly my favorite so far

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          • #6
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            damn man you killed it
            Flow: never missed a beat. it was perfect
            Lyrics: i loved them. they felt real.
            "And yeah I exposed you, to prove you ain't shit
            So logged up on your Facebook and took me off your friends list

            What a bitch, and you tryna get rich
            You a fucking nobody, you shouldn't exist"
            that was one of my favorite parts
            Other: your voice was perfect for the beat. good job man
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            • #7
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              Flow- Your flow on this was soo sick. 5/5

              Lyrics- Were nice, "Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit" was my favorite line. 5/5

              Overall- 4/5, it just wasn't long enough.


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              • #8
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                Another good track man, where ever vst you got fits man it's makin your shit sound bomb bro. Keep it coming.

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                • #9
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                  Thanks y'all. Made this track just to speak on a couple rappers puttin' my name in their mouth. Done with those fools though.


                  Did anyone check out J-Money's song?



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                  • #10
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                    Noble- Yep

                    Flow: I see your working on your flow and trying new styles. Am I the only one who noticed? Flow is dope.
                    Lyrics: You killed it! Every song you be puttin out u be killin! hah My fav song by u so far is go to sleep tho. Some lines I liked were. "Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit" and "In this game, stay shinin' like lamp
                    All I hear is Rocky music I guess I'm the champ"
                    Overall: 5/5. Homie you already know its gna be a 5 everytime haha

                    J$ - Where Im From

                    Flow: Really improving, I thought he was alright in the last couple songs but this song he killed. I now see what you saw in him YF. He has that monster in him.
                    Lyrics: He came with some sick lines. "Got some goons that will chop you up, HTOWN" & " Bitch im mental, crazy bout that cash. Yea my lifes a movie and your bitch is in the cast"
                    Overall: Its good. People be sleeping on J-Money. Hes pretty tight too. 5/5

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                    • #11
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                      Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
                      Noble- Yep

                      Flow: I see your working on your flow and trying new styles. Am I the only one who noticed? Flow is dope.
                      Lyrics: You killed it! Every song you be puttin out u be killin! hah My fav song by u so far is go to sleep tho. Some lines I liked were. "Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit" and "In this game, stay shinin' like lamp
                      All I hear is Rocky music I guess I'm the champ"
                      Overall: 5/5. Homie you already know its gna be a 5 everytime haha

                      J$ - Where Im From

                      Flow: Really improving, I thought he was alright in the last couple songs but this song he killed. I now see what you saw in him YF. He has that monster in him.
                      Lyrics: He came with some sick lines. "Got some goons that will chop you up, HTOWN" & " Bitch im mental, crazy bout that cash. Yea my lifes a movie and your bitch is in the cast"
                      Overall: Its good. People be sleeping on J-Money. Hes pretty tight too. 5/5
                      Appreciate that man. And yep, with all these songs I'll be dropping leading up to the mixtape you'll hear new flows and shit. Trying to expand my diversity as a artist and rapper in general. Thanks for recognizing my improvement bro. Thats what I'm really aiming for with every new song!

                      And for J-Money's song. Next time I see him I'll let him know what y'all/you thought of his song. I'm sure he'll appreciate it. Hes really trying to put in some good verses before he leaves for the coast guard, which is in like less than 2 weeks. Appreciate this feedback though bro.



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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Yep

                        Im downloading it now. Ill be giving feedback after school today for ya

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