My first 2 songs

[Gs Warrior123]

My first to songs recorded just looking for some feedback.

Starting Lineup - LimeLinx - Preview - The Starting Lineup GS.mp3

Over - LimeLinx - Preview - Over.mp3


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...acklist-2.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ome-songs.html

[WKinhere]

Re: My first 2 songs

Yeahhh i like that first beat, i wunder who did that,
Oh ya i did haha

[Gs Warrior123]

Re: My first 2 songs

Yeahhh i like that first beat, i wunder who did that,
Oh ya i did haha

Haha, thanks bro.

[rebirth-of-autotune]

Re: My first 2 songs

Nice song keep doing what your doing. good flow.
sorry offtopic Ive started writing lyrics but havent recorded a song can i just make a thread with a song name and put my lyrics or do I have to just get feed backs on my lyrics? sorry im new to this

[Pestrator]

Re: My first 2 songs

pretty good for first songs jus keep on workin on ur flow n delivery u need to put more emotion in it bc it just sounds like ur reading off a paper but they r pretty good for first songs keep it up 3.5/5

[Gs Warrior123]

Re: My first 2 songs

Nice song keep doing what your doing. good flow.
sorry offtopic Ive started writing lyrics but havent recorded a song can i just make a thread with a song name and put my lyrics or do I have to just get feed backs on my lyrics? sorry im new to this

I think you can put it in the Writer's Block section. Thanks for the input, and @Pestrator, thanks, i'll try to do that in my upcoming songs.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: My first 2 songs

good ish, and nice beats bruh.