Young Corruption- Come Take A Look

[Young Corruption]

i'm getting more comfrontable on mic. and i'm still trying to put more emotion

dicks

Lyrics:
(verse 1)
yeahhhhhhh
people say that i couldn't make it
come take a look and tell me just how to break it
this is me on my grind
spitting fire you are blind
running out of time
let me grab my fucking nine
cause i'm the fucking man
you nigga's stuck just like a jam
don't call it a car crash, more like a bucking ram
thats right i have that fucking gram
its so good people call it ham

(verse 2)
people think i can't rap because i'm white
i will show them up just like a firefight
so come take look at, what i have done
all this mayham i have cause, it was really fun




FUCK
the
POLICE

[morphineroberts]

Re: Young Corruption- Come Take A Look

i'm getting more comfrontable on mic. and i'm still trying to put more emotion

dicks

Lyrics:
(verse 1)
yeahhhhhhh
people say that i couldn't make it
come take a look and tell me just how to break it
this is me on my grind
spitting fire you are blind
running out of time
let me grab my fucking nine
cause i'm the fucking man
you nigga's stuck just like a jam
don't call it a car crash, more like a bucking ram
thats right i have that fucking gram
its so good people call it ham

(verse 2)
people think i can't rap because i'm white
i will show them up just like a firefight
so come take look at, what i have done
all this mayham i have cause, it was really fun




FUCK
the
POLICE

I hear you getting confortable on the mic...
your delivery was smooth enough, sir.
You better than me at the gettin it down... my shit comes out shaky
Emotion will come w/ repetition
You can put more emphasis on the words once you know em, sir
I usually spend a good amount of time tryna memorize the lines
you sound like a natural

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption- Come Take A Look

I hear you getting confortable on the mic...
your delivery was smooth enough, sir.
You better than me at the gettin it down... my shit comes out shaky
Emotion will come w/ repetition
You can put more emphasis on the words once you know em, sir
I usually spend a good amount of time tryna memorize the lines
you sound like a natural

thank you for the feedback. i will try and put more emphasis on words and yeah i pretty much remembered the words cause before i got on the mic i was saying it over and over to try and stay on beat. but i still had a paper in front of me just incase i forgot something. and thanls for saying i sound like a natural

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: Young Corruption- Come Take A Look

I See You Improve Quite Well Put Together. Nice One Man.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption- Come Take A Look

I See You Improve Quite Well Put Together. Nice One Man.

thank you. i'm hoping that every song i make i get better and better