Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

[Young Corruption]

i know some of ya'll don't liked YNR anymore and thats fine. but i was IMing him when he wrote his lyrics.. He did not bite just to let ya'll know...

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Lyrics:
(YNR)
First, you let them hate, that's a female trate..
My ego getting higher, Yes i know nobel..
My shot's can shake em up, snow globe..
Low blow? nah bro I don't think so..
Too many rapper's are flattering them selfs..
No A&R's gonna sign you and put you on shelfs..
I've made it now, So I don't got to say much..
Music is my life, So I don't get to play much..
Call me what you want, I call it how I be it..
Call it how you do it, I call it how I see it..
Hate comes harder when the fame get bigger..
Nothing strong yet, But i work to get a figger..
I'm telling you the truth, and this the real me..
To take Ruthless out the game, they gotta' kill me..
I've rep what I am, Ever since i started spitting..
Freestyle wasn't me, So I always stuck with written..
Spread my wing's, and i spread them far..
If your just tuned in, They call him YNR..
Rockin' with CORRUPTION,
Lava spitter, nothing but a eruption..
Shot's I'm dumping, Throne I'm coming..
Paper I'm touching, Life I'm juggling..
Mom I'm running, Girl I'm loving..
Rap I'm gunning, Hate Is flooding..

[Hook]
I've never felt so high in my life..
When you do something, make sure it's right..
Wing's of success, I'm about to take flight..
Never landing down yeah, that's my life..
[Repeat 2x]
Wing's of success, Wing's of success..
Wing's of success, Wing's of success..

(Young Corruption)
this is young corruption i ain't never say i'm gangsta
but don't think i ain't never pulled the trigger
now you starting to bug me just like those chiggers
if your gonna start rapping, make sure its right
because you never know when your gonna take flight
everyones life has its ups and downs
its up to you to bring it all around
never have your head down, this is your life
never have your head down, because it doesn't come twice
other rappers are always gonna hate
you gotta use that and do something great
shit got bad but i'm on a uprise
you haters down, call it a demise
i'm showing you my life this is no lie
i'm tired of getting high, i don't need fly
but i got Yung N Ruthless by my side
riding with him all you weak rappers gonna hide
you haven't heard a song just like this
its gonna leave you in a state of bliss
because we coming in and gonna rattle stuff up
you better be ready this is just a warm up
this is the shit that has never been done
we're coming around, don't even grab your gun
cause i'm high in the sky, i'm never gonna fall

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

dope beat

inspirational concept, and the hook goes nice with that concept.

1st guy has a nice flow and cadence, he rode it like he's been rapping for a whille

the second guy sounds new to rapping, but the lyrics was decent, just a choppy flow, and needs more emotion. alotta potential though.


PEEP ONE OF MY THREADS AND RETURN THE FEEDBACK PLEASE..........

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

yeah. YNR has been rapper for a long time. and i've been recording for only a week. i'm still learning to put emotion into songs. and i'll go check out some of your stuff

[mykill]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

YNR
Flow: A, the flow you have is flawless for you, but there's still some bumps there. Nothing major
Lyrics: C-, Good, but could be a bit better. There were instances where you could have used words with fewer syllables (something people tell me a lot when I do songs) to make it fit better. And that hook is good, but the repeat on wings of success sounds awkward to me.

Young Corruption
Flow: C, keep working on it. I can see the improvement. Keep at it
Lyrics: B+, Good work fam

Overall: 3/5, Not a bad song, but not an amazing one either. Good work by both parties though on the collab. I think you guys should do more work. Young C is doing a great job developing his style/flow/etc. Nice to see YNR stop by the Studio again. Keep up the good work guys

ps-King of my Jungle coming soon! (shameless plug)

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

YNR
Flow: A, the flow you have is flawless for you, but there's still some bumps there. Nothing major
Lyrics: C-, Good, but could be a bit better. There were instances where you could have used words with fewer syllables (something people tell me a lot when I do songs) to make it fit better. And that hook is good, but the repeat on wings of success sounds awkward to me.

Young Corruption
Flow: C, keep working on it. I can see the improvement. Keep at it
Lyrics: B+, Good work fam

Overall: 3/5, Not a bad song, but not an amazing one either. Good work by both parties though on the collab. I think you guys should do more work. Young C is doing a great job developing his style/flow/etc. Nice to see YNR stop by the Studio again. Keep up the good work guys

ps-King of my Jungle coming soon! (shameless plug)

Thank you fam.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

YNR
Flow: A, the flow you have is flawless for you, but there's still some bumps there. Nothing major
Lyrics: C-, Good, but could be a bit better. There were instances where you could have used words with fewer syllables (something people tell me a lot when I do songs) to make it fit better. And that hook is good, but the repeat on wings of success sounds awkward to me.

Young Corruption
Flow: C, keep working on it. I can see the improvement. Keep at it
Lyrics: B+, Good work fam

Overall: 3/5, Not a bad song, but not an amazing one either. Good work by both parties though on the collab. I think you guys should do more work. Young C is doing a great job developing his style/flow/etc. Nice to see YNR stop by the Studio again. Keep up the good work guys

ps-King of my Jungle coming soon! (shameless plug)

thank you for the feedback. i'll take what you said and use it to get better. and i'll be on the look out for the king of my jungle

[Cody]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

Ynr's verse is great. 4/5

Corruption first song i have heard from you and it was a pretty good verse. 3/5

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

Ynr's verse is great. 4/5

Corruption first song i have heard from you and it was a pretty good verse. 3/5

thank you sir. i hope that you listen to more of my songs when i release them

[Cody]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

thank you sir. i hope that you listen to more of my songs when i release them

No problem i will

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

Ynr's verse is great. 4/5

Corruption first song i have heard from you and it was a pretty good verse. 3/5

Thanks guy!

[Pestrator]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

ynr kills his verse real nice flow on this one and i like the hook also its real nice
2nd verse wasnt bad bro keep it up just liek everyone has said put mroe emotion in it n keep workin on improving u got potential though

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption & Yung N Ruthless- Wings of Success

ynr kills his verse real nice flow on this one and i like the hook also its real nice
2nd verse wasnt bad bro keep it up just liek everyone has said put mroe emotion in it n keep workin on improving u got potential though

thanks man. will try to do in my newers songs