!!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

[FuckTheFeds]

Sleepin on the Edge.
I Hope I Dont Fall.
AK Loaded Up For Em All
Bang Bang, Trigger Stay,
Stupid Spray, Take A Taste,
Ha Lifes A Waste, Mines A Race,
To The Top, Leave The Mop,
Grab The Mic, Cycle The Bike,
Around The World, My Armstrong,
No Lance Dog, Come Over Her Get A Dance Dog,
Throw U In The Sand Dog,
Fetch The Ball, Obey My Law
Like N.W.A Im A Doc.
Eazy With My E. Gotta Love Excasty,
Bad Bitchs Message Me, Ill Come Over Lata.
Gold To These Betas,Watchin For The Traders
Runner Like Them Raiders,McFadden In The Pocket
Cash Connected Like A Socket, Broke Niggas Watch It,
Rich Niggas Stock It, Unlock It, Saftey Off Cock It,
Lead In Ur Head,Time To Go To Bed,
Life Is Just A Mess, Guns Help The Stress,
Populations On The Less, Bullets Talk Like The Press,
Faster Then A Jet, Shoot U From The Vet,
Have U In My Bullet Ment, Hes Got A Thing For Ur Chest,
I Think U Need The Rest, U Claimed U Were Best,
Its A Shame That Ur Dead,Fuck The Feds.
Free Weezy And My Nigga Tony,
Marijuana Dog, Two Year Charge,
Im Glad I Wasnt With, But I Really Wish,
That Them Feds Stop Being A Little Bitch,
Let Us Live, Crack A L, Let Us Fail,
Up To Us, U Didnt Skeet Or Nut,
To Make My Butt, So Leave Me Be,
Keep Me Free, Ill Lead My Lead,
All I Need,Is Just Money,
World Is Rough, Hard To Trust,
Live Ur Life, Live Ur Rush
Good Mother Fuckin Luck

[MikeeFuckinCrazy]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

Pretty good 2.5/5


Rhymes didnt really have a meanin to em.

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

i tryed to flow like weezy, and not like eminem.. like i tryed to stay with punchlines, unlike eminem trys to make a story line kinda

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

tick tok im a animal with the watch
shinin threw the block, ridin with my glock,
straped to seat, police can not see,
hey hey im breathing kinda heavy
steady with my green, gotta keep that key
open another door, watch out for that porsche,
lambo comin threw, damn its a coupe,
expensive on the whip, careful were u sit,
pay a fuckin a tip, or be a fuckin a bitch,
suck the fuckin dick, rip till she splits,
then i fuckin split, watch threw my mirror,
see another girl, get in my mirror,

[tunechi81]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

Get on the mic and straight flow, no singers
got yo bitch so loose, now u can use 4 fingers
you can have her back, cuz bitch i dont need her
just beat that shit up, man shes a fuckin bleeder
pockets keep growin like i got a money tree
first a jag, then a lambo, now a fuckin bugatti
get up on the stage, but first u better pay me
cuz ima run this fuckin beat, never been that lazy
one more thing i gotta say, fuck the popo, so bitch u better taze me
cuz if you dont stop me now this shits gonna get crazy

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

there you go, nice verse

[tunechi81]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

im workin on it

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

ugh, on the beat again,
here to get the win, make the face grin,
happy on days, sometimes it may fall,
if i keep it up, then will i ball?
still on charge, brand new charge,bitch go er.
never hit the curve, lane for-ward,
movin on my path, pumpin up my cash,
i got my 9 life loaded, lookin for that cat,
now looking at his stats, damn he was a fuckin a rat,
split splat, paintin red, arts and craft,
tryin me, iv been set the trap,
saw u on the map, now dis u on this track,
miss u, cant come back,
to another level, takin and pickin my treasure,
mesuring up my measure,working off a quity,
times runing up, better start sellin dimes,
it aint very wise, only stick with halfs or youll know why,
im talkin crazy now, dont tell the mayor now,
but in my battle i had no doubts,
only abouts, about about about,

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: !!ftf!!read it.my best yet!!really want feedback

listen to my rhyme,
valentime,make it mine.
changin minds, shes with you,
u should of knew, shes with me had no clue,
pick the fights, show the dudes,
out all night, just the crew,
chillin hard, burnin yard,
playin games, get the ball,
trapin hoes, get em all.