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    This was me and my friend just going for a while...But we are always looking for beats and other stuff so you should comment and tell us weather you like or hate..any thing right now for the beginning is good..But this is not a song just lyrics but we can pretty much trun everything into a song so please help us get known

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...eezy-baby.html

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post287527


    ME:: this is not a battle its a war
    man, im tearing down the door
    I got dead bodies washing up on shore
    im not firing any weapons Im firing something more
    but Im setting the dial to get the kill
    Im spitting fire, hella ill
    I have to destroy to get my fill
    eating rappers is my on my bill

    JONASTY: Alright this is not a lyric
    just another life lesson
    so take a seat,
    grab a pencil,
    and ima show them what there missin..uhh
    As i report this game
    understand im not a analyist
    im just a kid breakin the silence

    ME: Im M.C.B
    im not a person, Im a fucking dynasty
    Im the best I set shame to pharacies
    You best notice Im what every album needs
    I set fire to competition
    with just greatness in repetition
    everyone can sit back and listen
    if you can't take the heat get the fuck out the kitchen
    but there is one thing missing
    greatness starts with me waking u p and pissing

    JONASTY: Easy to follow but slow to respon
    for every reason, theres a opposite reacton
    and this game is my pawn
    so im it movin strategicly
    every moment in life is just being taken figurativly...
    All this motivation around me man its goin to be hard to quit
    but im on some mortor shit
    never know when im blowin
    but its goin be quick...uhh
    I hop out the house with the swagger of a champion
    got 11's on my back man call me phil Jackson
    and its not for the or fortune or fame
    its for the love of the game...

    ME: You talking swagger of a champion
    but Im just seeing something I could put a tampon in
    Im the blood, sweat, and tears
    Im also what every rapper fears
    Im at that level you'll step near
    to step on my level you'll have to take steps on the moon
    hit it up "UP" status with a million balloons
    but I don't think you can step without a damn clue
    Im stepping down and pressing
    Im gonna teach you all a lesson
    This'll be just like open confession
    you tell me how you suck and I just give you my blessin

    JONASTY: Ill give you a second
    if you take heart to this lesson
    im not just a king im a mother fuckin legend
    i have god like flow
    and im giving all the blessings
    so im not goin do diss you and talk about you wack lyrics
    look at mr. man yeap him self.... teen spirit
    I once had girl who loved me for the real me
    so clearly
    she knew nothing about me
    cause consequently
    i never actually showed the real me..
    im gonna teach you a lesson on this real shit
    but dont blink twice cause it might not exist
    people say love come and goes
    but there is nothin in theis world that could tear these bros....
    appartial from where im standing
    im on top of the world come take my handin invitation
    im so amazing it took me awhile to get the motivation to finish this killing spree
    and while your on your knees
    always yell "free weezy!

    I sit in this room apparently i got something appeling
    cause these women flock to me
    like a bird above a ceiling..
    But this is my one chance, to show the world the way i am truly felling
    so grab your popcorn and to try examine every flow and rythem
    and im spiting fire just like a volcano
    going through and cutting down these kids just like drano...
    people always tell me, man your never on the clock
    but the sad thing is it the clock has never stopped...

    ME: I here to rip it up and take the prize
    cuz I got every essential including swagger size
    Im taking every win, bitch I never tie

    Im raising the bar in every category
    Looking for rise? check out my road to glory
    I be pounding it out, call it stagetory

    but you stepped to plate, hopefully not looking for a win
    but Im the greatest there will be and has ever been
    I got winning trails like hubkleberry and fin

    If I take another step up on to the charts
    Im setting up shots, just like playing darts
    look at you in 10 yrs, puching carts

    JONASTY: im runnin this shit like i got somewhere to be
    understand my flow, now thats another story
    cause i have the trophy
    already been through the blaze but still aiming for the glory
    still amazed..

    I was just released
    of the chain man
    18 yeras old
    and i got multi plans..
    As you step your game up
    to this new fame that came up
    im a tear that just cant be sowed up
    or shut down
    how many people you know that can change around
    felling proud
    but always seem to keep my feet on the ground

    ANd we have alot more soo if you are looking for anything just let us know, we are willing to wrok with anything,, and like i said these are just snippits of what we got and we are trying to get notice..so please help...M.C.B.

  • #2
    Re: Just started...Tell me what you think

    damn long as hell. I read some
    it has good potential. I don't know how yall flow is though.
    But from lyrics it's cool
    3/5

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    • #3
      Re: Just started...Tell me what you think

      lyrics are on point, but this ish was too long lol.

      would be better if yall put this jawn on an instrumental if yall gotta microphone you should record it.
      EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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      • #4
        Re: Just started...Tell me what you think

        Hey im the other guy on this and we were trying to record it but don't have stuff yet..so we are trying..and yea the flow is rough but trust me most of this shit is not that good with the other stuff we wrote down but for right now we are just giving you what we made up on top of the dome right then and there so thank you for the response its very much appreciative.

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        • #5
          Re: Just started...Tell me what you think

          Like was said by Dreezy, who knows how you flow but lyrically a strong 3/5, definite potential bro
          Ziggy B



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