Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

[Z!Greatest]

Hey yall, thanks again for the feedback on my Drake cover

This is an original tune I wrote and recorded a while back so I had to mix it with old settings, so it's maybe not quality wise quite as good, but hopefully yall still have some feedback on it

It's about a pretty bad split, some of yall maybe been through it, maybe not, but that's the overlying theme really. Gonna upload the lyrics in the description box in a second (by the time you read should be up)

Peace, Zig

YouTube - Z!Greatest- Divide

Feedback 1- http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...e-tonight.html

Feedback 2- http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...you-think.html

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

HOW u gonna be scottish but sound american.

i hope u sound scottish in your next song.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

oh yeah put the lyrics up please. its hard to hear all the words.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

Hey man, I know I don't sound very Scottish but I wouldn't say I sound American either, I have a heavy Scottish accent but it doesn't come across in music, I don't put any accent on deliberately or anything, I just try and keep the vocals easy to understand

And yeah that's me stuck the lyrics up now for ya bro, thanks for taking the time to listen

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

Not a bad son,

6/10 - Lyrics..
8/10 - Flow..

Work on the lyrics a little more, good job tho.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

u must have expected punchlines and stuff. ^^^

but and he used good metaphors and his lyrics were real and good.

punchlines not always necessary.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

u must have expected punchlines and stuff. ^^^

but and he used good metaphors and his lyrics were real and good.

punchlines not always necessary.

Amen.



Good song by the way Z. Quality isn't so great, but you did say this song is a bit older. Gave you thumbs up rating on Youtube, and gunna subscribe!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

wow, this is actually a nice song.

chill beat.

very nice lyrics and i like the similes and flow of it.

keep it up. imma have to start fuckin wit autotune.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

def not bad
Flow: it was niceeeee, accent still growing on me, but it sounds dope
Lyrics: like dude said, kind of hard to understand, but i got most of it
I like how good it sounds 2, thats a plus
3.5

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest- Divide (Original Song)

Thanks very much yall, probaly gonna display a bit of rapping on the next track as so far I've only really shown the auto-crooner side y'know Might have to do a few tracks minus the A-Tune too, I use it mainly for effect and not to fix "bad notes" genuinely