Young Corruption: Down for me

[Young Corruption]

This is off my new mixtape i'm working on. it will be way better than my first one but here are the lyrics
EDIT: this song is unfinished. i will be added another verse maybe two in the songs allows it
EDIT 2: forgot to put the link haha CLICK ME

Verse 1

yeah i wanna know if your down for me
its something everyone around can see
even though i thank god for your grace
it feels like i'm losing this footrace
when we get together we have chemistry
all i need for you is to agree
then we can start our lives together
i know we can make it through whatever
forget what other people think about us
there trying to ruin things like a virus
so i say to you come take a chance
you never know if you'll get that romance
you know i'll always be there for you
you are like a dream that came true
so much love coursing through my veins
getting harder and harder to restrain

Verse 2

the feelings i have i can't hide
telling me were friends would be a lie
look into my face, tell me feels right
when were together your gonna take flight
catching up to your big dreams
its the only thing that truly means
you having low self esteems
it seems like thats everyones new theme
but when i look into your eyes
i can see how your gonna shine
you may not think that your beautiful
but here i am being so grateful
to have you in my new life
sitting next to you, i wouldn't think twice
because you have the sweetest touch
it ends with me getting a huge rush

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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

NICE lyrics bro.

record it to see what the flow sounds like.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

not bad,

keep it up, and i wanna hear what it sounds as well.

[Young Corruption]

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haha fuck i didn't put the link to the song. i'll have it up now

[mykill]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Flow: C+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3.75/5, Good deal bro. You are really working harder and harder to improve your flow and get "up there" in the game. Dug around and found your first mixtape last night and give it a listen (slipped under my radar for some reason. Guess i was working hard on Kill or be Kill'T) and you seem to have figured out your style. The more work you put in, the more you take, the better the final product, and this shows. Keep up the good work

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Flow: C+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3.75/5, Good deal bro. You are really working harder and harder to improve your flow and get "up there" in the game. Dug around and found your first mixtape last night and give it a listen (slipped under my radar for some reason. Guess i was working hard on Kill or be Kill'T) and you seem to have figured out your style. The more work you put in, the more you take, the better the final product, and this shows. Keep up the good work

thank you for the feedback. i am working hard to get the emotion cause the girl i like even told me i needed to emotion lol. but glad to get an A on lyrics and a C+ on flow. yeah i was actually thinking about on my new song to switch up my flow in the middle of the song. but idk how it will sound be we shall see. but again thanks for the feedback

[Warriors49]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Shit bro good lyrics
lay off the autotune a little bit maybe but otherwise great job
3/5 all around

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Shit bro good lyrics
lay off the autotune a little bit maybe but otherwise great job
3/5 all around

eh i needed the autotune in this song. the way i sang/rapped it sucked without it. like it was really not good sounding at all. but i did finish the song finally

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Flow - Needs some work still. Feels a bit rushed and slowed down in some places. You are improving though!
Lyrics - Pretty good. You got the point across. Its always nice to greater your lyricism though with some wordplay, multies, etc. You'll get good with that stuff soon!
Other - That autotune effect sounds kinda weird. What kinda autotune are you using? Maybe I can find you the real autotune effect if you need it.
Overall - Good improvement from the last song I heard. 3/5!

[Young Corruption]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

Flow - Needs some work still. Feels a bit rushed and slowed down in some places. You are improving though!
Lyrics - Pretty good. You got the point across. Its always nice to greater your lyricism though with some wordplay, multies, etc. You'll get good with that stuff soon!
Other - That autotune effect sounds kinda weird. What kinda autotune are you using? Maybe I can find you the real autotune effect if you need it.
Overall - Good improvement from the last song I heard. 3/5!

thanks for the feedback. yeah i wrote this one when i was at school cause i was really bored. wordplay and multies are what i'm working on but its kinda hard since i've never practiced them when all i did was write.. and i use GSnap pitch correction. i know there is another Gsnap but idk how to work it

[iGot5onit]

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Tbh u went pretty hard

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Young Corruption: Down for me

thanks for the feedback. yeah i wrote this one when i was at school cause i was really bored. wordplay and multies are what i'm working on but its kinda hard since i've never practiced them when all i did was write.. and i use GSnap pitch correction. i know there is another Gsnap but idk how to work it

Yeah man, just keep practicing on it and you'll get better. But I've never really used GSnap, heard it wasn't good. Here is a download for the real Autotune VST. Just download it then put it in the folder where your other VST's (.dll's) are!

Hulkshare.com AutoTuneVST.dll