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this is what I consider a written freestyle.
Over Jay-Z's ... Public Service Announcement beat.
sat down yesterday morning, and wrote this in an less than an hour.
give it a listen, and feedback is always appreciated: negative or positive.
Paradox - Public Service Announcement
(verse: Paradox)
no shoes on, and I keep my mouth running,
the Shaq logo on my sweats, keeps dunking.
colonel in command, report to me,
or find yourself, with one breath, at the bottom of the damn sea.
you can't see me, that is how strong my shine is,
your vision is so weak, you cant see who I is.
I'm from a planet that is unknown,
tell the reaper I can't die today, and my funeral to postpone.
I'm taking care business, everything else can wait,
can someone tell me the difference, of being early or late.
people tell me I'm depressed, but I know I'm fine,
my coaches are trying to fine me, cause hard enough I'm not trying.
I'm wiser, sharper than a knife coming at you're spine,
from here on, the flow will only increase, never decline.
always take my precious time, to perfect my craft,
its not about doing numbers, if your good with the math.
suckers about to get schooled, lyrically, not in class,
life is in my possession, never up for grabs.
can't be open minded, nowadays everyone gets mad,
dead serious, no sarcasm, I should care, but I don't give a damn.
(verse: Paradox)
I'm a viva la vida, cold play, I'm viva la bam, jackass.
you're a donkey, don't be something you can't.
stop at the intersection, before the light goes red,
or I will charge that intersection like lebron in the paint.
last night I had a dream, that I would wake up this morning.
yawning, moving on and get straight to recording.
see no limits so I'm pushing it to the fullest,
money isn't the key, to the dreams that I be pursuing.
do what I please, and say what I wanna say,
don't mess around here, cause boy I don't play.
I'm undiscovered talent, waiting to be discovered,
until that day comes, I'm a proceed doing what I'm doing.
I'm too real, no wonder fake folks can't see me,
they claim that they're blind, standing behind blinds,
simply trying to hide, behind this worlds lies,
its a shame...
I'm a real man, these other dudes should of been born girls,
because they always acting like little bitches.
feedback:
Dreezy Baby - High N' Rollin'
Esteezy - Fed Up
Over Jay-Z's ... Public Service Announcement beat.
sat down yesterday morning, and wrote this in an less than an hour.
give it a listen, and feedback is always appreciated: negative or positive.
Paradox - Public Service Announcement
(verse: Paradox)
no shoes on, and I keep my mouth running,
the Shaq logo on my sweats, keeps dunking.
colonel in command, report to me,
or find yourself, with one breath, at the bottom of the damn sea.
you can't see me, that is how strong my shine is,
your vision is so weak, you cant see who I is.
I'm from a planet that is unknown,
tell the reaper I can't die today, and my funeral to postpone.
I'm taking care business, everything else can wait,
can someone tell me the difference, of being early or late.
people tell me I'm depressed, but I know I'm fine,
my coaches are trying to fine me, cause hard enough I'm not trying.
I'm wiser, sharper than a knife coming at you're spine,
from here on, the flow will only increase, never decline.
always take my precious time, to perfect my craft,
its not about doing numbers, if your good with the math.
suckers about to get schooled, lyrically, not in class,
life is in my possession, never up for grabs.
can't be open minded, nowadays everyone gets mad,
dead serious, no sarcasm, I should care, but I don't give a damn.
(verse: Paradox)
I'm a viva la vida, cold play, I'm viva la bam, jackass.
you're a donkey, don't be something you can't.
stop at the intersection, before the light goes red,
or I will charge that intersection like lebron in the paint.
last night I had a dream, that I would wake up this morning.
yawning, moving on and get straight to recording.
see no limits so I'm pushing it to the fullest,
money isn't the key, to the dreams that I be pursuing.
do what I please, and say what I wanna say,
don't mess around here, cause boy I don't play.
I'm undiscovered talent, waiting to be discovered,
until that day comes, I'm a proceed doing what I'm doing.
I'm too real, no wonder fake folks can't see me,
they claim that they're blind, standing behind blinds,
simply trying to hide, behind this worlds lies,
its a shame...
I'm a real man, these other dudes should of been born girls,
because they always acting like little bitches.
feedback:
Dreezy Baby - High N' Rollin'
Esteezy - Fed Up
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