Freestyle!

[IAmJay]

Ok I'ma make another freestyle, tell me what you think.

My swag is just too crazy and raw
you are too short, and I am too tall
just know that someday I'll ball
I'll never back down or will never fall
haha, I been making that fast money
I'll give you brain damage, and turn you into a dummy
so don't laugh, cause' ain't shit funny
ha, I'm the beast in HQ
I'm untamed so watch out, cause' I'll eat you
I'll stomp your ass like you're at the bottom of my shoe
I'm not a pro, but not that new
I am the king bitch, I thought you already knew
ha, you can't play me cause' I ain't no game
I'll hunt your ass down and leave you full of pain
I'm so crazy, people even call me insane
you can't compete with me cause' your raps are so lame
ha, my flow is too good
you can't try me, I wish a niggah would
I wana see you try, yeah you probably should
bitch I'm Jay and I'm too fucking hood!

hahaha, tell me what you think please!

[IAmJay]

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