Maybelline Clean (Verse)

[TBJMayle]

What's up yall??
This is a verse to a track my bro Crush and I are makin', check it out:


Chain on Loreal,
Wrist on Nutragena/
Always cop a new pair, never met a show cleaner/
Ask them boys who cleaner, they'll say me and Camel C/
Shawty say I'm desert hot, askin' where them camels be/
Shawty say she wanna hump, I told that bitch camel me/
I keep a bag of lyrics, wallet of flows, and can of beats/
How you gon' be cannin' me?/
Right here's where the cannon be so if we talkin' grocery store you can see that red meat/
I'm fresher than Listerine, Olay okay/
I don't wear no eye-liner, I can see the whole thang/
Oh you wanna role-play?/
I'll do you you do me no way!/

[nickdip]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

ur rapping about shampoo? r u gayy

[Uzzi Kid]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

Not bad, but the subject is a little fruity.

[nickdip]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

Not bad, but the subject is a little fruity.

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[JMSN]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

no hatin'
good lyrics just a bad choice in subject lol

[nickdip]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

no hatin'
good lyrics just a bad choice in subject lol

lmao everyones sayin this. your rhymes are good your subject is about shampoo though so i dont follow it =\

[ispit]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

ur rapping about shampoo? r u gayy

lmao omg haha

[JrockHQ]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

Wow the whole rap was about

1.Mouth washer
2.Shampoo
3.Acne medication
4.Girls
5.How your fly

Not that impress. but it rhyme so i'll give it a 5.5/10

[TBJMayle]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

Thanks for all the feedback.
Even though it's not positive I do appreciate it.
Imma try to post somethin' harder next time, keep checkin' in.
-J Mayle

[nickdip]

Re: Maybelline Clean (Verse)

Thanks for all the feedback.
Even though it's not positive I do appreciate it.
Imma try to post somethin' harder next time, keep checkin' in.
-J Mayle

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