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  • Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

    Yep, back off my little hiatus. Been doing lots of writing for my upcoming mixtape, this song won't be on it though. My homie asked me to go over this beat so I decided to. This was just kinda experimenting with some new effects, techniques, etc. You can probably expect my new mixtape 'I Told You So' some time around the start of the new year. Well anyways, enjoy this song. If you check it out, drop some feedback. Thanks for your time.

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    Verse
    Money on money, yeah my guap is stacked so high
    Dollars everywhere and I don't even fuckin' know why
    Closed eyes or open, still could never see me
    And I be with that crack, but I'm talking them dope lines
    I don't care what y'all gotta say, I'm here now so I guess I gotta stay
    Y'all need a captain in the game, well I'm here now so I guess I gotta play
    THP up in this bitch, but y'all still can't see us
    And if they ask why, all I'll say is because

    Hook
    I got money on money, my whole crews with me
    And we headin' to the top, we bout to get there quickly
    Who's gunna stop us, wheres the competition
    We tired of the hatin', we tired of the bitch
    Yeah we makin' money, yeah we makin' music
    Yeah we makin' profit, y'all be steady losin'
    Yeah my crew be stuntin', yeah my crew be stuntin'
    Yeah my crew be stuntin', yeah my crew be stuntin'

    Verse
    Uhh, yep yep same shit different day
    The money always talkin', so I don't care what you bitches say
    But when you turned around and you looked a different way
    Man your girl got in my coupe, but I ain't talkin' where them pigeons stay
    Where the competition at, where the competition at
    You want some dope lyrics, well wheres my compisition at
    All these average Joe's, takin turns for the worst
    But bitch I never do, I bout to murder every verse
    And if you think that won't happen, well thats impossible
    Ever try to doubt me and I'll stop the show, stop the show
    And if you tryna stop me bitch, you headin' for the worst route
    I be reppin' THP, like I'm tryna work out

    (Hook)

    Verse
    And if you ain't with THP, bitch you better go away
    My lines go over their heads, y'all lines couldn't pass they shoulder blades
    Uh, and I bet that everyone knows my name
    They say I spit that heat, well its probably cause I smoke the flame
    We rollin' planes, always writin' raps
    I hold the game, they never fightin' back
    Here we go, oh shit, listen to the mufuckin' dopeness writtin' by this dope kid
    Listen to the chorus once again cause soon enough, you will wanna quote it

    (Hook)



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    Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

    damn man. glad to have you back in tha studio. and you came back with that fire
    Lyrics: they were straight very good; couldn't go wrong them them and your hook was perfect man
    Flow: you switched up the flow and it worked for you. thats good cause you can see how you've progressed and everything was on point
    Other: the effected you used on the hook was very nice. it complemented the beat well and with what you did with your verses
    overall a very well written song and you couldn't ask for more. good job man
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    • #3
      Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

      You know I'm cool with you but I hate that effect, I don't know why but it pisses me off.
      The lyrics are quite shallow, too many songs are about making money.
      Flow seemed forced in the first verse and the hook.
      Overall not feeling this one.



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      • #4
        Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

        Originally posted by snowman99 View Post
        damn man. glad to have you back in tha studio. and you came back with that fire
        Lyrics: they were straight very good; couldn't go wrong them them and your hook was perfect man
        Flow: you switched up the flow and it worked for you. thats good cause you can see how you've progressed and everything was on point
        Other: the effected you used on the hook was very nice. it complemented the beat well and with what you did with your verses
        overall a very well written song and you couldn't ask for more. good job man
        Thanks man. I'm glad you liked it. It was more of a just a song for the heck of it. Was working on learning to get good autotune, like on the hook. And tried some of the things. You'll probably love my mixtape if you like this. Its some really good shit (Not trying to brag, just saying lol.), and I haven't really even started to record it yet.

        Originally posted by Franknstein View Post
        You know I'm cool with you but I hate that effect, I don't know why but it pisses me off.
        The lyrics are quite shallow, too many songs are about making money.
        Flow seemed forced in the first verse and the hook.
        Overall not feeling this one.
        I respect that. Buts its not all about money lol. Except for the hook and like 4 lines, its not about money at all. Its got a couple meanings to it.



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        • #5
          Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

          Shit is nice my nigga!!
          Hook is real nice, pretty catchy and clean, I like it.

          Had some dope lines in here:
          "I be reppin' THP, like I'm tryna work out" . Basically whole song had sick lines tho

          I see you added new shit to your arsenal, thats good and bad on some parts. However Your getting better everytime I hear you. I still can't believe Dreezy got best rapper award, fail on everybody who voted against you. Tbh

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          • #6
            Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

            Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
            Shit is nice my nigga!!
            Hook is real nice, pretty catchy and clean, I like it.

            Had some dope lines in here:
            "I be reppin' THP, like I'm tryna work out" . Basically whole song had sick lines tho

            I see you added new shit to your arsenal, thats good and bad on some parts. However Your getting better everytime I hear you. I still can't believe Dreezy got best rapper award, fail on everybody who voted against you. Tbh
            Glad you liked the hook. That was my main focus on this song. I wanted to make something catchy, but still some good lyrics and flow. And yes, that was one of my favorite lines from the song too lol. And with the "I see you added new shit to your arsenal", do you mean with the autotune? Glad you see you notice improvement. And with the HQ award, its no big deal to me. Dreezy always been on his grind on here. I probably lost votes just for the fact people don't like me, rather than not liking my music. But its no big deal. Hopefully if I drop some new shit here soon people might start liking my music more on here, who knows. But thanks for the feedback anyways. It helps me to know what people enjoy in my songs so I can keep those things on point and still try to excel on the other parts.
            Last edited by THA GR8 M8; 11-21-2010, 07:42 AM.



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            • #7
              Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

              Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
              Shit is nice my nigga!!
              Hook is real nice, pretty catchy and clean, I like it.

              Had some dope lines in here:
              "I be reppin' THP, like I'm tryna work out" . Basically whole song had sick lines tho

              I see you added new shit to your arsenal, thats good and bad on some parts. However Your getting better everytime I hear you. I still can't believe Dreezy got best rapper award, fail on everybody who voted against you. Tbh
              Lol whole awards were fail to be honest, most members voted for their friends rather than the person who deserved to win.



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              • #8
                Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

                Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                Glad you liked the hook. That was my main focus on this song. I wanted to make something catchy, but still some good lyrics and flow. And yes, that was one of my favorite lines from the song too lol. And ig deal to me. Dreezy always been on his grind on here. I probably lost votes just for the fact people don't like me, rather than not liking my music.with the "I see you added new shit to your arsenal", do you mean with the autotune? Glad you see you notice improvement. And with the HQ award, its no b But its no big deal. Hopefully if I drop some new shit here soon people might start liking my music more on here, who knows. But thanks for the feedback anyways. It helps me to know what people enjoy in my songs so I can keep those things on point and still try to excel on the other parts.
                Yea I know I support niggas on their grind, im all bout making that paper haha but yea just think its stupid how u didnt win. Like Frank said ppl just voted for their friends and cuz ppl dont like you lol
                With the arsenal part, yea I am talking bout the autotune. It went good with the song, I noticed you also added like an echo affect am I right? Like after a line you would say the last word in a line twice. Good shit my nigga. It worked for the song and added an added affect needed to make the track go over the edge.

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                • #9
                  Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

                  Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
                  Yea I know I support niggas on their grind, im all bout making that paper haha but yea just think its stupid how u didnt win. Like Frank said ppl just voted for their friends and cuz ppl dont like you lol
                  With the arsenal part, yea I am talking bout the autotune. It went good with the song, I noticed you also added like an echo affect am I right? Like after a line you would say the last word in a line twice. Good shit my nigga. It worked for the song and added an added affect needed to make the track go over the edge.
                  Yep thats exactly how it was, sadly. And yeah I loved the autotune on this lol. And yeah there is a echo effect. What I did was on some of lines, on the last words, I just did another layer and just rapped the last words of the sentence. Then added the echo effect. It makes the track seem more 'full', imo.



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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

                    Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                    Yep thats exactly how it was, sadly. And yeah I loved the autotune on this lol. And yeah there is a echo effect. What I did was on some of lines, on the last words, I just did another layer and just rapped the last words of the sentence. Then added the echo effect. It makes the track seem more 'full', imo.
                    Yea I think so too. Well overall goodjob bro, light one up to this

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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

                      Siiick! This Is The Fucking Shit, I Just Wish You Released Mopre Shit. The Tape Is Gon' Be Dope. 5/5

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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Stuntin' (Homerun Remix)

                        Your flow on this track was good and your lyrics were good.

                        I also Co-sign snowman. The studio needed more people posting music. nice drop.

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