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  • Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

    New song, another song testing out new stuff. Won't be on the mixtape. I think this is better than the last song (Stuntin') I put out. So check it out and let me know what you think. Thanks.

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    Intro
    Now tell me how you does it
    You say you at the top, well I'm still right above ya
    I'm onnnnn
    Well, alright

    Verse 1:

    Who else really tryna fuck with me? I’m with THP
    We that group that everybody tryna be, muthafucka who as fly as me?
    The rap game overpopulated something like China be
    But I'm the dude they look up to, I'm everything they try to be
    Yep, I'm on fire like a martyr
    The game teaches you lessons and I'm only getting smarter
    I'm known to go harder, I just do what I want bitch
    Well I'm still above ya, I don't care if you talk shit
    I be killin' shit, but you should already know that
    They say they at the top, well thats a level I done flown past
    And my zones past, every one else
    So when I hop up on a beat you just hear it yell for help
    Yeahhhhhhhhh

    Chorus

    Now tell me how you does it
    You say you at the top, well I'm still right above ya
    I'm onnnnn
    I stay fly mothafucka
    If you ain't feelin' faded, then get higher mothafucka
    Okayyyyy
    Eatin' rappers like I'm hungry in this bitch
    And I'm shining in this game, now its sunny in this bitch
    Uhhmmmm
    Gettin' money and winning's first
    And I don't give a fuck, cause I'll kill any verse

    Verse

    Meet me in the fast lane
    I'm all about change like my fuckin' last name
    So its time to save rap while its on its last strain
    I be so legit, while y'all can barely make it past lame
    Yep, Imma mothafuckin' genius
    How come my flow so dirty but I always stay cleanest
    And these hoes all on my penis, hell its hard to keep em off it
    Doin' business like an office, I'm not caring what the cost is
    But see, yep probably fuckin' notice me
    I start off in the booth, while I hold the beat
    Then I start spitting flame and let it fuckin' slowly heat
    Then make it rest in peace, then lay it by the holy feet
    Murderrrr

    (Hook)


    Verse

    Uhhh, I'm telling you I'm raw as shit
    Look up on the internet, nobody put out harder shit
    All these views and plays, Youtubes thinkin' that I slaughtered them
    All this shit addin' up, I guess that means I'm smart as shit
    Started at the bottom, but since then, upward
    Now I'm so high, all I really say is "what up birds"
    I already said enough verbs, now I ain't got time for no bull
    I been spittin' fire since I was young, now I'm Noble
    Ahh

    (Hook X2)


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  • #2
    Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

    already told you on msn what i think of this track its dope!
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    • #3
      Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

      damn u killed all the verses the hook was wallright it just wasnt as smooth liek ur flow on it but it aint bad but u killed all the verses good stuff bro keep it up 4/5

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      • #4
        Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

        Thanks you two!


        But where is more feedback?



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        • #5
          Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

          I gotchu.

          I like how you can spit 3 straight verses, Your flow was very good, I like the concept of the song, The hook is very catchy but your voice was a little off on it. Overall good song dude.

          5/5


          I LOL'd at this line 'Eatin' rappers like I'm hungry in this bitch, And I'm shining in this game, now its sunny in this bitch'

          Good one.
          Last edited by YoungTune.; 11-23-2010, 04:21 PM.


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          • #6
            Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

            Originally posted by YoungTune. View Post
            I gotchu.

            I like how you can spit 3 straight verses, Your flow was very good, I like the concept of the song, The hook is very catchy but your voice was a little off on it. Overall good song dude.

            5/5


            I LOL'd at this line 'Eatin' rappers like I'm hungry in this bitch, And I'm shining in this game, now its sunny in this bitch'

            Good one.
            Lol. Kinda replicating Wayne's hook lol. Thanks for feedback!



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            • #7
              Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

              You Killin' This Shit!

              Crazy Flow, Nic Change Of The Chorus And Some Great Verses.

              5/5 Tape Gon' Be Dope!

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              • #8
                Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

                "If you ain't feelin' faded get higher mothafuckaa"

                one line that made me go "OH DAMN"

                Flow: 4.5/5 right away it seemed like your flow wasn't gonna work well with the track but as it progressed i liked it more and more, by the time the third verse was rollin' around i was feelin' it brah.

                Lyrics: 4.5/5 to me very average lyrics for anyother rappers, but the way you deliver them is amazing. you have a way with words man. you don't just spit the same shit in different ways. you spit different shit in the same way. and that way is straight fire. you're lyrics are the best part of your music. so definitely keep improving them. your multi game is always on tap.

                Overall: 5/5. this track is one of the best i've heard from you in a long time. this beat matched your style. you never seem to dissapoint bro. keep working hard, keep getting your music out there. i know one day i'll see Noble at the top. keep doing your thing bro!

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                • #9
                  Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

                  Appreciate the feedback, I'd look some more though.


                  But I'm going to be starting on my mixtape sometime soon!



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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

                    Wow. Thanks for ruining a good song. Only thing I liked was the instrumental.

                    Maybe you're sick, or have a syndrome, but your voice is really nasally.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

                      Originally posted by 9RaChEaL0 View Post
                      Wow. Thanks for ruining a good song. Only thing I liked was the instrumental.

                      Maybe you're sick, or have a syndrome, but your voice is really nasally.
                      DAMN!!



                      ** waits for response.


                      Originally posted by 9RaChEaL0 View Post
                      Maybe you're sick, or have a syndrome, but your voice is really nasally.

                      maybe his rap skills are so sick, so he raps like that.
                      thats actually a good idea thp , nice.
                      Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 11-23-2010, 11:10 PM.
                      EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Right Above Ya (Prod. By Kane Beatz)

                        i didn't like this one as much as i liked your other one but it was this good
                        Lyrics: you have really grow lyrically and it shows in this song. i liked them. i wasn't really feeling what effect you used on the hook, i liked it lyrically wise but now so much listening wise if that makes sense(hard to explain)
                        Flow: your flow was good. i didn't hear you fall or anything
                        other: if this isn't even shit thats gonna be on your mixtape then i got high hopes for it . i know you won't disappoint.
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