Pyro-Seconds

[xXPyroXx]

This is my first original track with my friends beat hope ye like pls comment
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[ATLien666]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Flow- Hooooly shit, you did the beat justice. When the beat started, I was like, he's not gonna stay on this, but you definitely surprised me. You definitely did an excellent job. 5/5

Lyrics- I had a lil' difficulty understanding it all, but what I heard was great. You have a more lyrical approach, so I like that. 4/5

4.5/5

[Cody]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Pretty good track
4/5

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Nice shit fam, overall 4/5

Some shit i could ride too, no doubt.
flow:3
lyrics:3

nice

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

sound, im glad ye liked it

[indiglo09]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Really siick song!!!! killed all the verses, hook excellent nd cool beat

[Gibbsy]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

okay this is pretty decent overall but i want to offer some constructive critisim to, the flow is pretty tight overall however your delivery is lacking a little sounds like you could nail the emotion a bit more , beat is killer and the quality is nice, the hook is also catchy too nice work man!!

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

thanks man im always looking to improve

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

nice song kud

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Thanks man i know u like it u blaring it all the time

[mykill]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

Flow: C-
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 3.75/5, The hook is pretty nice. Vocals need to be turned up both in volume and in ferocity. The beat is pretty nice for your friends first attempt at beat making. Sometimes you have like a good flow, then you see so robotic sounding it takes away from the good lyrics. I think you got the hang of riding the beat on the 2nd verse, but keep ya ear open and double check stuff like that when you're recording. I like this song and I think the hook is what makes it work so well.

[broc717]

Re: Pyro-Seconds

i like it, keep on workin on the flow, hooks catchy tho, stayin grindin man