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  • Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ver-remix.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post326793

    Download Link: LimeLinx - Preview - Over & Over & Over.mp3
    YouTube Link: YouTube - Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

    Lyrics:

    Intro (D-Block):
    Over and Over and Over into the night
    Come any closer you might have to turn off the lights

    Verse 1 (Rich Breezy):
    Said She a nympho, I treat her like my tenth hoe
    Big boobs, big ass, what a bimbo
    Flow so sick though, Might hit a lymph node
    Had to pretend bro, so I could get my dick blown

    She say to hold me
    I told her hoe please
    I wouldn't even bring you to my homies
    cause I ain't even lonely

    Chick was ambidextrous, textin' me for sex and shit
    I hit her on the low, tell her get up on my level bitch
    She say she just a citizen, I tell her that I'm listenin'
    I think I caught her eye, cause the diamonds always glistenin'

    but I ain't even stressin'
    I think I learned my lesson
    She thinks she the best one
    Now It's on to the next one

    Chorus (D-Block):
    Over and Over and Over into the night
    Come any closer you might have to turn off the lights
    Girl your my one, you said you were done,
    and so I was gone, I tried to move on
    Now it's over and over and over singing this song

    Verse 2 (Rich Breezy):
    Next verse, time to have sex first
    We even stevens like I'm Principle Wexler
    Disney channel swag, need to throw it in the bag
    Your pussy is the enemy, I'm comin' to attack

    Bass beater, hot like a space heater
    Sendin' tracks to the morgue like a bass eater
    Gettin' head from this bitch like a face feeder
    Pussy race and I might be the chase leader

    I'm goin' harder on this track than I ever will
    Won't stop 'till I think I got the better deal
    I'm feelin' great, probably better than I ever will
    Always hungry for the money where's the chedder meal

    It's cool cause I'm chillin'
    It's sad you other rappers will never know the feelin'
    But I'm gonna keep thrillin'
    When we release this track we all bound to make a killin'

    Chorus (D-Block):
    Over and Over and Over into the night
    Come any closer you might have to turn off the lights
    Girl your my one, you said you were done,
    and so I was gone, I tried to move on
    Now it's over and over and over singing this song

    Verse 3 (Rich Breezy):
    Lust fun, lovin' on my trust fund
    Feelin' good no time for adjustments
    Need a date, can I bring more than plus one
    Too many choices, so I guess I'll bring a bus ton

    or a plane, or a limo, or a car ton
    Always happy got me dancin' like I'm Carlton
    Gettin' drunk like I'm at a fuckin' bar son
    Outer space swag, I'm goin' on a star run

    It's kinda crazy how far I can go
    Artist with these tracks Breezy Vincent Van Gogh
    Crazy good chemistry, Magnesium flow
    Please don't stop me now cause I'm on a fuckin' roll

    All this chronic got me weezin' like I need a nebulizer
    Spittin' on the mic like a mouth to a breathalyzer
    Rest in peace B, I'll never have a death desire
    If you wanna spit with me come and test my fuckin' fire

    Chorus (D-Block):
    Over and Over and Over into the night
    Come any closer you might have to turn off the lights
    Girl your my one, you said you were done,
    and so I was gone, I tried to move on
    Now it's over and over and over singing this song

    Outro (D-Block):
    Over and Over and Over into the night
    Come any closer you might have to turn off the lights

  • #2
    Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

    any feedback would be greatly appreciated!!

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    • #3
      Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

      Flow - Pretty nice flow. Wasn't nothing special. But it worked out nicely.
      Lyrics - Really nice. Multies and wordplay were pretty nice!
      Other - The hook was kinda dope too. Nice song.
      Overall - 4.5/5.



      protect dunston at all costs

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      • #4
        Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

        thanks man I really appreciate it!! How should I change/improve my flow?

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        • #5
          Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

          Originally posted by stillfli69 View Post
          thanks man I really appreciate it!! How should I change/improve my flow?
          I don't think there was anything wrong with it man. It worked fine and you barely went off beat. I was saying, it wasn't like one of those flows that make people "DAMN!" or anything. You know?



          protect dunston at all costs

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          • #6
            Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

            gotchya! do you have any advice on how to make my flow make people say that? lol

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            • #7
              Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

              Originally posted by stillfli69 View Post
              gotchya! do you have any advice on how to make my flow make people say that? lol

              go listen to thp's song and study his flow.

              he has the best flow in the studio, and possibly the world. he sounds like he can be the next star rapper.
              he also has alot of fans here on the forum, u should become a thp fan, he's a true star.


              EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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              • #8
                Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

                Originally posted by stillfli69 View Post
                gotchya! do you have any advice on how to make my flow make people say that? lol
                Now actually I don't. I'm still trying to find my flow as well lol.

                And just ignore the dude above me. Once you start getting recognition around here, which you should be already getting, he'll start hating on you. Hes got issues with people who get feedback on here, since he gets none.



                protect dunston at all costs

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                • #9
                  Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

                  haha good deal man thanks, and I'm hoping to get some good feedback!

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                  • #10
                    Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

                    Flow: A
                    Lyrics: B

                    Overall: 4/5, Solid effort from both of you. Hook singing might need some tightening and work, but a majority of the track is executed well. Lyrical content is appropriate and laid out well. Ad-libs are good. Beat is fire. You two have done an excellent job. Only other critique I could see is that the vocals for the verses dont sound as clear as they could, but that's just a minor setback.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Rich Breezy-Over & Over & Over Ft. D-Block (Chambliss Production)

                      thanks for the feedback!!

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