Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

Is Explicit on this forum?

Your verse was good seemed off beat a little bit though, Explicits was good as well.

Overall track-4/5

Yes he is. And thanks. I don't really see where its off beat though :/. But I appreciate the listen and feedback.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

who deleted dat??

[Lil Smirk]

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woah loving this song good overall im mean yall both got your point across in the song and stayed on topic. this is meaningful music good job

[YoungTune.]

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who deleted dat??

THP messaged chronic and told him too.


But is this song off of I Told You So or Therapy Treatment????

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

yeah yall some dope rappers.

btw , @ youngtune, pestrator, cody , chapweezy, weezyiscrazy, lil smirk, mykill, \\

drop me some feedback on my new song if yall get a chance, \

thanks.

you too noble.

again, great song. u should be famous bro.

[THA GR8 M8]

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THP messaged chronic and told him too.


But is this song off of I Told You So or Therapy Treatment????

Lol no I didn't? Edit: Well I did now.

And its on neither as of now.



& thanks Lil Smirk. Its much appreciated!

[JMSN]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

Listening to Explicit's verse..

Flow : 4.5/5 very good clean flow, was expecting a lot more though. his delivery was spot on though, perfect emphasis on the major words in each bar. thats what makes an artist stick out to me. very well flow from my homie X

Lyrics: 5/5 gotta love the lyrics that are straight from the heart, i can almost feel what he's going through in his words. very deep shit. props homie!

now on to Noble..

Flow: 4/5 very solid flow, only thing i could find wrong with it was the repeated start of the bars with And. messed up your flow it seemed like. but still very solid, most people in here don't realize that this beat is very complex and hard to flow with. not ONE type of flow is gonna work the whole way through. but good job bro, keep up the fire flows!

Lyrics: 5/5 same as with X, your lyrics were deep as fuck and straight from the heart, only bad thing i could pick out was the And And And And And beginnings of bars. without all those i think it would've been lyrically flawless.

[Young Corruption]

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i really liked this song. ya'll make a good partnership to say the least. both of ya'll stayed on beat the whole way through. i like Nobles lyrics a little better but explicit did a really good job too.. but i got one question. Did explicit change his name? cause he sounds a lot like ruthless from The Reasoning Mixtape (New Invasion is the song) that Noble and Mr FTP did.

[JMSN]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

i really liked this song. ya'll make a good partnership to say the least. both of ya'll stayed on beat the whole way through. i like Nobles lyrics a little better but explicit did a really good job too.. but i got one question. Did explicit change his name? cause he sounds a lot like ruthless from The Reasoning Mixtape (New Invasion is the song) that Noble and Mr FTP did.

yes, that is Explicit, he changed his name recently..

[Young Corruption]

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yes, that is Explicit, he changed his name recently..

oh alright i thought it was him but thanks for clearing it up for me

[THA GR8 M8]

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now on to Noble..

Flow: 4/5 very solid flow, only thing i could find wrong with it was the repeated start of the bars with And. messed up your flow it seemed like. but still very solid, most people in here don't realize that this beat is very complex and hard to flow with. not ONE type of flow is gonna work the whole way through. but good job bro, keep up the fire flows!

Lyrics: 5/5 same as with X, your lyrics were deep as fuck and straight from the heart, only bad thing i could pick out was the And And And And And beginnings of bars. without all those i think it would've been lyrically flawless.

Thanks man. The reason I did the 'and' at the beginning of each sentence on that part was, I thought it made the lines seem more alike. Because the first two lines, I rhymed 'Meant to be' & 'Meant for me', which sound the same. Then on the other two I rhymed 'Cent from me' & 'Sent for me' which also sound the same. I thought adding 'and' at the start of each line made the lines like come together. Appreciate the feedback bro.

i really liked this song. ya'll make a good partnership to say the least. both of ya'll stayed on beat the whole way through. i like Nobles lyrics a little better but explicit did a really good job too.. but i got one question. Did explicit change his name? cause he sounds a lot like ruthless from The Reasoning Mixtape (New Invasion is the song) that Noble and Mr FTP did.

Thanks man. And yeah, he changed his name.

[JMSN]

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@THP i see what your getting at now. thanks for clearing it up bro. for all of ya'll who don't really know Noble, he is one of the most intelligent rappers alive. read his lyrics more than once, everytime you look at them you will figure out a new reason behind his lyrics, trust me. he's showed me the proof many times. i've skipped over some of his bars before and then went back and re-read them carefully and saw the true meaning behind them.

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