Lil Smirk ft. Zay Baby - We got That fire

[Lil Smirk]

Listen to the song here: YouTube - Lil Smirk - Fire ft. Zay Baby Official Video
im on the first and third verses please drop feedback

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[ATLien666]

Re: Lil Smirk ft. Zay Baby - We got That fire

Chris Brown and Tyga?!

Ya'll niggas sound just like 'em.

But anywho:
Flow- Was on point, for both of ya'll. I liked the second verse more, though, his verse was more laid back. 3/5

Lyrics- Cool wordplay, and some nice metaphors, not a lot were really original, though. 3/5

Other- I haaaated the chorus, holy shit.

Overall- 3/5.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Lil Smirk ft. Zay Baby - We got That fire

dope beat.

i actually kinda like the hook lol.
your flow remind me of soulja boy, which cool.
nice lyrics as well

4/5 , good song guys.

[mykill]

Re: Lil Smirk ft. Zay Baby - We got That fire

Lil Smirk // Flow: A // Lyrics: B-
Zay Baby // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3/5, Recording quality sounds pretty good, except at some points. Chorus doesnt sound right at all, and lyrically its a "miss". Good track though. Tons of good punchlines. Good energy from both. Welcome to The Studio.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Lil Smirk ft. Zay Baby - We got That fire

Flow - I liked it. Some of the pauses in the middle of bars could have been avoided in my opinion.
Lyrics - Were pretty nice. Nothing too lyrical. A couple nice punchlines throughout though.
Other - Your homie had a nice verse. I liked his better. That Facebook line was dope lol. The hook was decent, could use work though.
Overall - 3/5.