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    Love, just saying the word could hurt.
    Ex's friends, people treating you like dirt.
    The feelings I never knew I'll never know.
    The feelings I have now I'll never show.
    I fell head over heels for someone i thought was ideal.
    There's tension I'm starting to wonder if there was ever any sex appeal.
    Your a whore and this is how I feel.
    I wouldve ran for you forever, spinning wheel.
    You were my friend then my lover.
    My lover now my foe,
    I still love you but now I'm happy when you go.

    As you raise I fall.
    When I raise you call.
    When your runnin I crawl.
    No, you crawl cuz your always on your knees.
    Your the reason for all of these worries.
    Im leaving and I wish I could say I had fun but I didn't.
    So they're just be a awkward silence when I leave.
    Your not a person to me anymore your just a noun.
    I wish I could describe you with a adjective but there's not a adjective that foul.
    I wish I woulda knew what I know now.
    Our love was a movie, now it's over, get ready to bow.

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    Re: Beginner wanting criticism

    i got a 2 verse speech,
    about them police,
    never showin us peace,
    is cause im with them bees,
    blood niggas till they die,
    i blood niggas till they die,
    go head think u can try,
    i make ur momma cry,
    i hate when i aint high,
    it makes me wanna sigh,
    then i relize, im just lucky to be alive
    Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
    I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
    Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
    You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
    Empty the clip then roll the window up
    Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
    I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
    Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
    That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
    Dark shades EazyE
    Five letter YMCMB
    Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
    I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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    • #3
      Always talking that blood bitch
      Wanting those bee stings
      Look in my eyes bet I made you rich
      Five sack nickle bags
      Hooked up to connect
      All I hear is ring ring rings
      ....
      ..
      He already dead RIP daniel

      Fuck the feds just give head --> https://instaud.io/3sU0

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