Loyalty

[WKinhere]

Heres a song i did, im the first verse.
LimeLinx - Preview - Loyalty (ft. Zalae).mp3


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Re: Loyalty

okay, now i listened to this a couple of times before i came to a final decision... its a good song, i like your verse, the only thing is.. is that your delivery really brings your verse down, the flow is alright aswell, and the lyrics are good for this type of track now i honestly didnt like the second dudes verse, imo the auto-tune really threw me off... he shouldve used his normal voice for this track, it wouldve sounded better... and his flow fell off on some points...

overall this track is alright, keep it up man 3.5/5

[WKinhere]

Re: Loyalty

okay, now i listened to this a couple of times before i came to a final decision... its a good song, i like your verse, the only thing is.. is that your delivery really brings your verse down, the flow is alright aswell, and the lyrics are good for this type of track now i honestly didnt like the second dudes verse, imo the auto-tune really threw me off... he shouldve used his normal voice for this track, it wouldve sounded better... and his flow fell off on some points...
overall this track is alright, keep it up man 3.5/5

Thanks, thats some good feedback. and i know the second guy isnt that good, but hes a friend... soo
and the autotune was because he used to be obsessed with it.
Thanks hommie.

[Sentus]

Re: Loyalty

First of all...why the fuck do you have a Justin Bieber picture in your post. That already turned me off in the begining. Beat was pretty good, I liked the chorus, don't know what it's from. Alright about the rapping, this really wasn't that bad. 1st verse was much better than the second and third, autotune is so fucking annoying and it makes whoever uses it look like a joke, js. I'll feed the first verse though, your style was kind of distinct, it wasn't like everyone else on here so that's good. Lyrics were pretty simple though, try using some multis and internal rhymes. Your flow was really choppy at some times too, there were many points where you could have added an extra syllable or two in the lines instead having unneeded pauses inbetween words. That will make everything much better.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Loyalty

Damn Justin Bieber is showin' his gayness in that gif! He turns me on.. A LOT


















LOL

[WKinhere]

Re: Loyalty

First of all...why the fuck do you have a Justin Bieber picture in your post. That already turned me off in the begining. Beat was pretty good, I liked the chorus, don't know what it's from. Alright about the rapping, this really wasn't that bad. 1st verse was much better than the second and third, autotune is so fucking annoying and it makes whoever uses it look like a joke, js. I'll feed the first verse though, your style was kind of distinct, it wasn't like everyone else on here so that's good. Lyrics were pretty simple though, try using some multis and internal rhymes. Your flow was really choppy at some times too, there were many points where you could have added an extra syllable or two in the lines instead having unneeded pauses inbetween words. That will make everything much better.

thanks for the feed hommie.

Damn Justin Bieber is showin' his gayness in that gif! He turns me on.. A LOT
LOL

Haha, i seen that gif and i thought... i had to use it.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Loyalty

kinda wack bro.