Black & Yellow | ONLY BLACK & YELLOW VERSE ON HERE SO I GOTTA MAKE IT HOT ! RATE

[MikeeFuckinCrazy]

Heres somthin i wrote to Wiz's Black & Yellow. Rate itw

yellow black
P on my hat
take a picture facebook it bitch send a fax
ima rapper so for skool i put an end to that
momma hate it but she lovein where she livin at
drug dealer nigga i dont pretend to be that
but im bout my money so i guess you can say i do that
i handle mines
my lifes in every line
if time is money then the world should call me father time
& i smoke weed, its not an obsession
i advise you to try it if u can handle the recession
& since i buy alot ma niggas gotta bring protection
15 with a dream but one day ill be a legend
BITCH !

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: Black & Yellow | ONLY BLACK & YELLOW VERSE ON HERE SO I GOTTA MAKE IT HOT ! RATE

ah hun they know what it is,
black and yellow with a hood twist,
id put the money up, but it would end like this,
u and u pick a whip, o you like the vet,
well ill let u rent, just help my stress,
un strap ur dress, let me in ur chest,
i think they know the rest, black and yellow getin a little wet,
on this black and yellow, feelin like a vet,
on my re up, thinkin how to stretch,
gotta keep ur eyes open, and away from dat press,
alot of ppl dont understand, that the hustles for a man,
and yall a bunch of kids,i pop more heads, and flip more lids,
i kill and i hid, and i hit fore i miss, so i got before i get,
talkin a dif, ent, lan, widge, lift up ur hopes,
and pull down ur throats, weed aint that bad,
just them government boys mad,
that they cant, get a tax,
other wise they would be able to relax,
shit it keeps me on track, with my neck on my back,
and my feet on my leg, so i move to the bay,
and see numbers all day, looks like the pray finnally payed

[UnknownP]

Re: Black & Yellow | ONLY BLACK & YELLOW VERSE ON HERE SO I GOTTA MAKE IT HOT ! RATE

Alright, i took some time before i think i got into the flow you was aiming at, but it's good. I really like how you go off. "15 with a dream but one day ill be a legend
BITCH !" powerful shit right there.
Some lines didn't feel real though, i'm sorry, but i've been there too. The overall impression is good though.
i would give it a solid 3/5