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    zSHARE - The Recipe.mp3
    The Recipe
    Artist - Broc
    Mixtape - R.O.E (dropping Dec. 28th)

    Lyrics -

    V1:
    a splash of the vodka a little bit henny
    smell the green from the beam before it enters in me
    and im flyin up up up up and away
    feel the jane slow dancin with my brain
    uh these hatas dont maneuever how im movin or pursue this how I do it
    you can check the rhythm check the groove and find nothin less
    then the best in the flesh more or less I am next uhh
    ma ridin with me is the baddest bitch out
    she aint a dime she a g a thousand dollas of cash
    or degrees hotta then the finest ass u eva had
    try to step in my shoes playa you would never last
    never ask how i got it, just agree that i have it
    and could kill any verse they lay with some adlibs
    as for the hatas steady claimin i am trash
    whom is punked first is whom that laughs last

    Hook:
    a little bit of this and little bit of that
    a little bit of ink and a little bit of pad
    a mixture of some syllables a pinch of some rhymes
    a melodic loop i give you the life and times
    a little bit of happiness a little bit of pain
    a little bit of pride and a little bit of shame
    a little bit of shine i know i will make it rain
    wont be satisfied till these critics get it in they brains

    v2:
    get a grip before you figure ill bow
    because when im in the zone aint no gettin me out
    i am showin yall the ropes I can hear em say wow
    like im spittin reflection flows they mirror my style
    listen i am on a mission i am chasin my degree now
    so these hunnys wuntin money sayin make my pussy meow
    they got me on a speed dial im actin like i notic them
    then hit it and i be out im usain boltin them
    i been in that game and i have shuffled those cards
    and ever hand has me like theres no HEARTS in these brawds
    its only when you throw her DIAMONS and open some ace of SPADES
    while you hittin up the CLUBS, that she drops the POKER FACE
    but ill put that deck away im back up in my bag
    someone tell the rap im game, its lackin wut i have
    cause im not snappin bout a dance i am relayin all the facts
    and the fact is that im back and im all up in that ass

    v3:
    in they brains where i hide
    you just look a little lost
    see the pain in my eyes
    broc you look a little off
    what is wrong what you on
    nothin yet where the bong
    where the weed hit the tree and im gone and im off
    to another world baby see u lata i will holla
    livin out this life with a dream and a dolla
    word to j dot thats word to jays roc
    im tryna have sean like word yo hey broc
    uh grindins all i got and i sprinkle in my heart
    on my 14th lap and these hatas yet to start
    chillin in the huddle mindstate of a quarterback
    im shittin on this game, yall havent even farted yet
    wonder when im fallin back, ima keep ya wonderin
    cuz none of you could ever understand the type of love im in
    me and hip hop on some lova shit
    im the flash to its lightnin, the rumble from its thunderin



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    not gonna be a pushover, im pushin thru to your ears
    kickin' a villanous lyric, ignitin' up all your fears..

  • #2
    Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

    Flow - I liked it. Went over the beat really nice.
    Lyrics - Let me just say, damn. Some dope shit.
    Other - Hook is was dope too. Nice to see you back, Broc.
    Overall - 4.5/5.



    protect dunston at all costs

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    • #3
      Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

      Lyrics: Good job..Nice punchlines/wordplay
      Flow: Was good...Didn't seem to fall of at all.
      Other: N/a

      4/5


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      • #4
        Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

        good lookin out on the love yall, im gonna post the album when its done for sure


        can someone edit the title, to The Recipe instead of Feel It Breathin' i switched the songs but forgot about the title haha




        thanks again
        not gonna be a pushover, im pushin thru to your ears
        kickin' a villanous lyric, ignitin' up all your fears..

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        • #5
          Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

          Really nice song!!
          Lyrics: 4.5/5 - funny punchlines
          Flow: 4/5
          Overall: 4.5/5 You got real potential man keep it up

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          • #6
            Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

            Really Hot Song Man 1st Song Ive Heard From You So Keep It Up
            Lyrics: - I Like That Hook (Like Im Spittin Reflection Flows They Tryin To Mirror My Style)<<Hot Hot Hot
            Flow: I Cant Say Anything Was Wrong With It
            Overall: 4.5/5.0

            Keep Makin The Hot Music Man Ill Def Be Downloadin The Mixtape
            RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
            Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

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            • #7
              Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

              This is a nice track. I think this is the second track I've heard from you. You got a great flow man.

              Flow: Perfect flow. You rode the beat. Good voice too.
              Lyrics: I liked the concept of the track alot. You got all the technical shit down too wordplay etc...

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              • #8
                Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

                nice flow tbh lyrics is aight as well

                ^^ Created by Jake_YMCMB

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                • #9
                  Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

                  good looks on all the love, im glad yall like it. hopin yall get the mixtape
                  not gonna be a pushover, im pushin thru to your ears
                  kickin' a villanous lyric, ignitin' up all your fears..

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                  • #10
                    Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

                    also, if yall are tryin to stay updated

                    Broc (Artist Page) | Facebook
                    not gonna be a pushover, im pushin thru to your ears
                    kickin' a villanous lyric, ignitin' up all your fears..

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                    • #11
                      Re: Feel It Breathin - AUDIO

                      Aight, first off, your flow is really good. Your mic presence is also very good, you sound really natural on the mic. Step your lyrics up though, you said a lot of basic things and had really simple rhymes, less, best, flesh, next. Everyone uses those rhymes. Be more creative and complex and you could be a really good rapper.

                      http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
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