C Red - Chasin Paper (feat Marley and C birdz)

[Redd Herring]

sup everyone.. Been MIA but im back to drop this off before christmas
Its my Newest Remix out to promote my new team up mixtape comin out called "C red or C birdz" so look out for that but until then enjoy this song

Feedback Appreciated

YouTube - C Red - Chasin Paper ft Marley G and C Birdz

LimeLinx - Preview - Chasin Paper - C-red ft Marley G and C Birds.mp3

I havent been here in a while but dammnn it feels good to come back to GREAT music 5/5 from me

This is going to be my new cut ride song . I already know everyone i fucks wit is gonna fuck wit it 4/5

[mykill]

Re: C Red - Chasin Paper (feat Marley and C birdz)

Get that dead space OUT of the beginning. fa serious.

First guy (im guessing its you) // Flow: C+ // Lyrics: C
Second Guy (i'm guessing its Bird) // Flow: D // Lyrics: F

Overall: 2/5, Lyrically you need to step it up. Whoever's mastering your tracks needs to fix your vocal volume or you need to speak louder and with more feeling. Delivery needs to be better overall between everyone on this track. Good effort, but you got some areas you need to work on. Keep em coming and I'll keep giving you feedback and try my best to help ya out.

BTW I'm doing a Black n' Yellow remix for my school. Might be out this weekend.

[Tha Professor]

Re: C Red - Chasin Paper (feat Marley and C birdz)

lol u be chasing paper? rly? hustlin?
if that's true, u would have gone harder.. step up yo game

[Sentus]

Re: C Red - Chasin Paper (feat Marley and C birdz)

This beat was fucking awesome lol, what's it from.

First guy was alright, quality was ehh but I'm starting to expect that from the song. Flow was pretty good but lyrically it was boring.

Second guy needs to turn his vocals up, can barely hear it. Some interesting rhyming lol, I don't know if half this stuff rhymes lol

Third guy was really bad flow wise...did he even rap to this beat or did he just record his vocals and then you threw it on the beat? It was super short too, I expected more when I heard this beat.

[Redd Herring]

Re: C Red - Chasin Paper (feat Marley and C birdz)

Thanks for the feedback

As for no rhymes Im not to sure i can agree with that but thanks anyway