Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

[THA GR8 M8]

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Hook
I'm going, going, going, gone
I'm going, going, going, gone
Fading in the wind, blown by the breeze
Now I'm pinned, stuck in the tree's

Verse (Explicit)
Some days, I feel like I could just give up
But I won't, I'll just keep drinking out this styofoam cup
Tomorrow is a different day, as the world decays
I just want to be left alone, fucking go away
Watching people around me change, acting all strange
You only live once, no lives available for exchange
I'm not a wisdom man, im not a man full of wisdom
I've done some stupid shit, but never done time in prison
Through my vision, I'm happy with every decision
Cause the past makes you who you are, be happy with what your given
Its true when people say, you never know what you got til its gone
And often thats alot, morning from dusk to dawn
People get killed, over worthless bullshit
All this blood spilled for what? because its a habit
This world is full of drama, drama that dosnt stop
This world is full of karlma, that could make a person drop

(Hook)

Verse (Noble)
I rap alot, cause I go through crap alot
I give my all into this, I'm praying that I have a shot
These days seem longer, but my life just seems shorter
Wheres the time going? We in the fourth quarter
This our time to shine, we really need to prove something
How can you say you livin' life when you really do nothing?
Try to do this the right way, never on to the wrong path
But I'm still paying for mistakes I made in my past
People try to bring me down, and put me on blast
But keep this shit up, you'll be dealing with the devil's wrath
But fuck it, Imma keep going till outta here
How can you say you livin' life when you think 'bout tears
So its done with the tears, no more pain
Done with the old me, and in with the change
In the beginning its lame, but at the end we'll make history
But I'm gone, I wouldn't care if you didn't miss me

(Hook)

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Feedback #2

[Wisheezy]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

I don't ever really post in Tha Studio maybe I should...anyways this needed a post.

Flow was really good - On point
Lyrics: Were really good. Had some real nice content THP that was pretty sick
Other: You fitted on the beat so well
The beat is proper sick aswell!


KIU

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

I don't ever really post in Tha Studio maybe I should...anyways this needed a post.

Flow was really good - On point
Lyrics: Were really good. Had some real nice content THP that was pretty sick
Other: You fitted on the beat so well
The beat is proper sick aswell!


KIU

Thanks man! Really appreciate that. Glad you liked what you heard! And you should definitely start peeping into this section more, there is a few dope artists on here.

[YoungTune.]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

Flow: Great, was good all the way through.
Beat: Was excellent, didn't drown out your voices, and was chill.
Lyrics: Good content from both of you, the hook was pretty catchy.
Other: I liked this track, both of you fit the beat well as Wish said and you sounded dope together.

5/5

Btw, Props to me for the cover art.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

Flow: Great, was good all the way through.
Beat: Was excellent, didn't drown out your voices, and was chill.
Lyrics: Good content from both of you, the hook was pretty catchy.
Other: I liked this track, both of you fit the beat well as Wish said and you sounded dope together.

5/5

Btw, Props to me for the cover art.

Thanks! And yeah props to you for the dope cover.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

Quick bump. Posted it kinda early so people probably missed it.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

this youngtune guy was the same guy talkin shit in the other thread. wtf??

[YoungTune.]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

this youngtune guy was the same guy talkin shit in the other thread. wtf??

Lol...So you want me to hate on all of his shit? No...I "hate" on his music when it sounds like shit, This song was pretty good.

the fuck?

[tha_chronic]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

yo , i don't like to put too much feedback as I don't really make music myself so critiquing it seems a bit unfair but YO ..THP I loved your verse, Explicit could have got his delivery better and the hook needs a bit of work otherwise dope motherfuck shit and i'm not #justsayin' that.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

this youngtune guy was the same guy talkin shit in the other thread. wtf??

I don't think he was hating in the other thread. Thats what people don't get these days, the difference between hate and feedback. He wasn't just saying my song wasn't good without letting me know what he didn't like about it. Rather than saying "this sucks", he let me know what was bad about it. Whether I agreed with him or not, I respect him saying he didn't like it and telling me what was wrong with it just as much as I respect the people who tell me they like the particular song. He was giving feedback, so I can work on the stuff that wasn't good in his eyes.

yo , i don't like to put too much feedback as I don't really make music myself so critiquing it seems a bit unfair but YO ..THP I loved your verse, Explicit could have got his delivery better and the hook needs a bit of work otherwise dope motherfuck shit and i'm not #justsayin' that.

Appreciate that man. The hook probably could have used work.. But I'm not really a singer so I don't know how to master and put effects on singing to make it sound good lol. I just went with the raw vocals for the most part on the hook cause I wasn't bout to ruin it with autotune. But I appreciate the feedback, and I'm sure Explicit will appreciate it once he sees it.

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

Feedback Time:

Chorus Is Cool, Its Not To Catchy But Its Aight. The First Verse Was Cool, Killer Flow & Great Lyrics. I Like The Second Verse Too, The First Went A Little Harder But This Track Is Crazy! 4.5/5... Great Job Both Ya'll, Your Collabs Kill Everything Else On Here.

Is This Gonna Be On A Mixtape Or Something

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble X Explicit - Going, Going, Gone

Feedback Time:

Chorus Is Cool, Its Not To Catchy But Its Aight. The First Verse Was Cool, Killer Flow & Great Lyrics. I Like The Second Verse Too, The First Went A Little Harder But This Track Is Crazy! 4.5/5... Great Job Both Ya'll, Your Collabs Kill Everything Else On Here.

Is This Gonna Be On A Mixtape Or Something

Were still not sure if we are going to do a mixtape or not lol. But thanks for the feedback man! It truely helps me improve!