Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

[Gibbsy]

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MotorWay Blues

Hope Yall Enjoy My Mixtape Will Be Released just before xmas with a follow up mixtape being released early new year , Any Feedback Given is greatly apprciated and if you need feed back holla !! One Love Yall!!

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

First off, what's up with that avatar pic? You blowin' us a kiss? lol...no homo

Flow: A- (only cause your singing isnt 100% at the moment, and
Lyrics: C

Overall: 3.75/5, You have a great musical voice. Why use autotune? Learn to sing better and it'll pay off in the long run. Maybe add some backup vocal ad-libs to that chorus. UK rappers always seem to sound interesting on the track. I bet its the accent. knocked off for lyrics cause nothing seemed too fantastic while listening. good pop-infused song though.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

now thats feed! thank you man im glad you took the time to brake it down, i hate autotune man but my voice isnt a singer at all, fortuanly tho this is just mixtape songs nothing is set in motion to be a single or anything so i just do my best vocally when singing and add the lil touch ups if i feel neccersary this song isnt one of my favorites but the beat is sick and i had to rock it , my new material currently in the works is for a debut independent album so it will be of much greater quality etc and vocally singing will be left to artists i collab with thanks for the feed once again though man i really apprciate it!!

---------- Post added at 05:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:29 PM ----------

oh n da avtar lmfaoo for real i av no idea why i pouted , will change dat pic soon tho ahaha

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

now thats feed! thank you man im glad you took the time to brake it down, i hate autotune man but my voice isnt a singer at all, fortuanly tho this is just mixtape songs nothing is set in motion to be a single or anything so i just do my best vocally when singing and add the lil touch ups if i feel neccersary this song isnt one of my favorites but the beat is sick and i had to rock it , my new material currently in the works is for a debut independent album so it will be of much greater quality etc and vocally singing will be left to artists i collab with thanks for the feed once again though man i really apprciate it!!

---------- Post added at 05:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:29 PM ----------

oh n da avtar lmfaoo for real i av no idea why i pouted , will change dat pic soon tho ahaha

anytime. I listened to your other song but I think I forgot to leave some feedback on that, so I'll do it when I finish this song I'm recording. And you dont have to change the pic, I was just ribbin' ya a bit

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

dont sleep yall

[Tha Professor]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

4/5
Flow is great i must say i am impressed! tha autotune isn't so bad.. it sounds pretty good. only for chorus purposes, just maybe tune it a lil down wit it. and improve tha lyrics, go harder.

OUT

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Motorway Blues (Mixtape Version)

4/5
Flow is great i must say i am impressed! tha autotune isn't so bad.. it sounds pretty good. only for chorus purposes, just maybe tune it a lil down wit it. and improve tha lyrics, go harder.

OUT

Much apprciated man!!!