JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

[SkJayDubb]

My friend (brian's) first song, so i didn't really know how to edit him yet.
but more to come, i let him get the first verse because he found the beat

comment, rate, subscribe to me?

link:
[URL = http://www.limelinx.com/files/7239c3712aeadb14f1415bbf57a29956





Proof
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/22961-coleon-introduction-verse-2.html#post354965
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/22872-aint-thinkin-bout-you-yung-kay-feat-yung-cashanova.html

[Coleon]

Re: JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

that's wassup bruh!

[P.K.U. Beats]

Re: JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

first verse
its his first song so its okay
but after a while the flow is boring

second verse
best verse of this track in my eyes
i like the doubletime parts

third verse
really dope voice
flow is on point

overall its a good track

[mykill]

Re: JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

Pooh // Flow: D // Lyrics: C-
JayDub // Flow: A // Lyrics: B
Eric // Flow: B- // Lyrics: C

Overall: 3/5, Good beat selection for a nice crunk/gutter type song. Pooh, first thing you need to work on is your delivery. You sound very boring. JayDub, great job showing us why you're one of the best up-and-coming rappers in the Studio. Keep puttin' in work and you'll get to the top fast. Great verse, great delivery, great flow. Work on that mastering though. Eric, nice slow-draw flow. Might want to speak louder and more clearly so people can understand you clearer. Keep working on it and you'll be good. What's up with the sudden echo at the end of your verse though?

[SkJayDubb]

Re: JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

thanks you all

[Pestrator]

Re: JayDub - ShutUp feat. Pooh, Eric [SK Collaboration]

not a bad song overall the 1st and last guy need to work on their flow, they need more liek emotion to it but lyrics werent bad and the second guy killed it, the flow was mad ncie and the emotion was there aswell as the lyrics. keep it up 3/5