Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

[Gibbsy]

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YouTube - Gibbsy© Change The World (HD)

Hope yall enjoy this is the first single from my Brand New Mixtape
Punch Drunk Millionaire And its Pretty Radio Freindly Hope Yall Enjoy!!

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

DOnt SLeep Yall

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, This song is pretty f'n radio-friendly poppy sounding. Flow, there's some moments when you slip and try to stretch some bars further than they were meant to go. One thing I do is I write something, I rap it in my head, then i play the beat and rap it a few times to the beat. Then i re-write and re-write as much as necessary. You're not far from perfecting your flow, just a few minor bumps to smooth out. Your sound still is good. Like that UK-draw, really accentuates your songs. Lyrics are mild, with a few jalapenos here and there. Good radio track man.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, This song is pretty f'n radio-friendly poppy sounding. Flow, there's some moments when you slip and try to stretch some bars further than they were meant to go. One thing I do is I write something, I rap it in my head, then i play the beat and rap it a few times to the beat. Then i re-write and re-write as much as necessary. You're not far from perfecting your flow, just a few minor bumps to smooth out. Your sound still is good. Like that UK-draw, really accentuates your songs. Lyrics are mild, with a few jalapenos here and there. Good radio track man.

thank you man your feed is always really helpful and constructive man i apprciate you taking the time

[ATLien666]

Re: Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

Flow- You did stretch a few bars, and tried to put too much in one, yk? I got the same problem, so I know where you're comin' from. But other than that, nice flow. 4/5

Lyrics- You're becoming one of my favorites in the studio, very consistent. Yeah, this is veeeeery radio friendly, aha. But it's pretty good. It's deep for a radio/single song, yk?

Other- Who's singing the chorus?

Overall- 4/5

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy_ Change The World 2011

Flow- You did stretch a few bars, and tried to put too much in one, yk? I got the same problem, so I know where you're comin' from. But other than that, nice flow. 4/5

Lyrics- You're becoming one of my favorites in the studio, very consistent. Yeah, this is veeeeery radio friendly, aha. But it's pretty good. It's deep for a radio/single song, yk?

Other- Who's singing the chorus?

Overall- 4/5

thank you yeah i do sumtimes rite a lil to much for the beat etc aha thats why i find i put to many words in aha the hook i cant remeber who is singing because this track bin in the works for a lil while an i just finished it up for my mixtape thank you for your feed