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    Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

    Feeds:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post347400
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-ruthless.html

    YouTube - Gibbsy©_Out My Head (HD)

    Hey Yall This Another Song From My New Mixtape "Punch Drunk Millionaire", This one is already getting some great feedback its pretty unique, just wanted to drop it on here and get yall opinions any feedback is much apprciated
    Mixtape dropping over the weekend/early next week , and two other tracks from it are also on youtube
    One Love Yall


    Tags: gibbsy lilwayne new
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    Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

    The begining/chorus was awful, I almost turned the song off. It got better when you started rapping though. Flow was pretty dope, I love fast flows. Lyrics were alright, pretty boring though. I can tell this was kind of a club sond though so I doubt you were going for lyrics. Problem with making a club song though is your quality sucks. I've told you many times instead of making tons of mixtapes you should just do one song/verse at a time, get feed on that, improve what you did wrong and then move onto the next verse. All these mixtapes aren't helping you at this point in your career.

    http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
    http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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      Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

      I dig the song keep up the work, wasn't really digging the hook (the part when you crunk the auto tone to the max) but the rest was good.

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        Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

        Flow: A+++
        Lyrics: B

        Overall: 3/5, Yeah...I HATE to agree with Sentus this frequently ( i think that's at least twice in the last 2 months) but that intro to this beat is real lame and the chorus is really really mediocre. That chorus come with the beat or something you got someone to do? Your flow on this one is f'n insane. The speed is crazy and you never lose a step man (except at one point where it sounds like you lost your breath). Great job! Lyrics are pretty good. I think if you put the verses on a different beat, you'd have a really raw song.

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          Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

          Yo' thanks for the feed yall mykill fanx for the feed man yeah i loved the beat but wasnt too keen on the hook etc, just came with the beat so i had to drop something on it i did try as hard as i could to get a good flow over this one so im glad you liked the flow, but yeh yo i did lose my breathe once haha dint want to edit it out an put punch in's in tho, as i always drop a verse one take or at least try to on my of my tracks thanks for the feed again yo' i apprciate all the comments and the helpful advice means alot!!!


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          • #6
            Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

            i like the chorus. nice song too.

            YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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            • #7
              Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

              youve a very unique style and your better than most famous english rappers so keep up the work man flows good, lyrics could be less rhyme ordinated and more meaningful, but overall good
              Like Me At : http://www.facebook.com/PyroRaps

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                Re: Gibbsy_Out My Head (Hit HD)

                Originally posted by xXPyroXx View Post
                youve a very unique style and your better than most famous english rappers so keep up the work man flows good, lyrics could be less rhyme ordinated and more meaningful, but overall good
                thank you man!!! much apprciated


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